为某英语杂志写一篇简介中国农业概况的短文。字数120左右。文章内容要点如下。在要点的基础上内容可适当扩充。 1.中国用很少的土地养活了众多人口。种了占世界三分之一以上的庄稼。

2.中国科学家一直在努力发展农业。拥有超级杂交水稻和高产玉米。

3.发展农业,也注重保护环境和资源的循环利用。

生词提示

farmland耕地;irrigated area灌溉面积;resource资源;environment环境;recycle/reuse循环利用;organic farming有机农业 

写作支招

一) 写作定性

本文为概括介绍性的说明文。要求语言简洁,条理清晰,叙述客观。时态主要为现在时。句-f多为陈述句。按要求文章分三到四段为宜。二) 难点突破

1.可用词汇

effective,agriculture, development, feed,irrigate, farmland, struggle, work on,have/ has been doing,search for,super-hybrid rice,high output corn, environmental-friendly,fertil?izer,avoid damaging to

2.结构模仿

肯定成绩或成就:运用wonder,make it possible to和with结构使句子更精炼地道。It is a wonder for them to make it possible to complete the building in just three years with?out any modern tools.

寻找解决问题的办法:用现在完成进行时更能体现不断努力,一直坚持的精神,用with/ without doing结构和分词结构使语言简洁。

The local government has been looking for ways to develop tourism without doing harm to the environment.

Using the newly-developed technique, these factories are making twice as many products as before.

描述后果和成效:运用not only...but also的倒装句型使句子紧凑。Not only can the farmers in the villages be provided with more firewood but also the forests play an important role in keeping the soil from being washed away by heavy rains.

3.参考句型

Sb. has been doing sth.某人一直在做某事make it possible to do使做某事成为可能

twice as much/many as是.... 的两倍

pay much attention to sth. /doing sth.更多关注做某事keep...free from doing sth.使..... 不做某事

 请根据下面提供的内容写一篇人物简介。完整地表达所有的信息点,字数120左右。

人物简介

李娜,1982年2月26 tl出生,从小就对运动有天赋,6岁幵始练习羽毛球,9岁转学网球。

主要经历及获得荣誉

1. 2002年:离开网球场,到大学读书;两年后重返球场;

2. 在包括她丈夫在内的几位著名教练的指导下,进步神速;

3. 2011年:法国公开赛女子单打冠军,第一位获得大满贯赛事单打冠军的亚洲网球选手。

别人对她的评价

1. 坚定的信心,履行诺言;

2. 你的评价……

?生词提更

French Open法闰公开赛singles title女单冠军Grand Slam大满贯?写作支招

一) 写作定性

本文为简单介绍人物的文章,也即人物传记。要求简介人物的生平,业绩及别人对其评价。时态多为一般过去式,现在时。表达以陈述句为多。这类文章通常按照时间顺序来组织。从写作要求可看出文章内容里既要包括对人物的生平的介绍,还要包括他人的评价及作者自己的主观看法。文章可分为两段,一为李娜的经历成就,二为对李娜的评价。

二) 难点突破

1.可用词汇

childhood, practice, badminton, coach, introduce, has a gift for,took a break,with the help of,under the guidance of,follow the instructions of,making achievements/ progress/ im?provement ( s) ,regard ... as,strong determination/mind, think highly of,keep one's word

2.结构模仿

叙述经历和成绩:运用诸多短语和分词结构使语言地道简洁。

Asimov's life began in Russia, where he was born on 2 January, 1920.(人教新课标教材选修7,16页)

It was when Asimov was eleven old that his talent for writing became obvious.(人教新课标教材选修7,16页)

With the help /Under the guidance of these good teachers, including Mr. Smith /Following the instructions of several good teachers, Henry has been making greater and greater achieve?ments/ progress/ improvement") rapidly in painting.

He won the competition,becoming the first Chinese who got a gold medal for China.

对人物的评价:运用regard ... as和in my opinion,I think等清晰地表明观点和评价。

Many people regard him as one of the most important leaders in the 20th century and think highly of his contributions to his motherland.

In my opinion/view,he is really a great man.

I think that he is not only intelligent but also very brave.

What impressed me most was his courage when facing the coming danger.

3.参考句型

sb. has a gift for sth.对某事有天分

With the help of sb.…在某人的帮助下……

sb. made great progress/achievements/improvements取得巨大的进步/成就/提高

sb. is regarded as...某人被看做.....

think highly of sb.高度评价/赞扬某人

What impressed sb. most was...给某人留下印象的是.....

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