题目内容
17．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Our school lies on the foot of a mountain with a small river passes by in front．It used to look like a beautiful garden．In the garden there are ever-green trees and all kinds of flowers in the school yard all years round．
But great changes have been taken place after a chemical factory was built near our school a year ago．It produces various poisonous gases and pours a lot of waste water into a river．This has terrible polluted the surroundings of our school．
I think that the local government must takes steps to protect our surroundings and prevent from being polluted．
分析 文章大意：本文主要介绍了我们的学校．我们的学校位于山脚下，前面有一条小河经过．我们学校过去像一个美丽的花园．花园里全年都有绿色的花草树木．但是一年前一个化工厂建在我们学校附近，产生了各种有毒气体，往河里倾倒各种污水．作者希望政府必须采取措施保护我们周围的环境，防止被污染．
解答 Our school lies on the foot of a mountain with a small river passes by in front．It used to look like a beautiful garden．In the garden there are ever-green
at passing were
trees and all kinds of flowers in the school yard all years round．
year
But great changes have been taken place after a chemical factory was built near our school a year ago．It produces various poisonous gases and pours a lot of
去掉 since
waste water into a river．This has terrible polluted the surroundings of our school．
the terribly
I think that the local government must takes steps to protect our surroundings and prevent∧from being polluted．
take them
1．on→at 考查介词搭配．at the foot of在山脚下．用介词at．
2．passes→passing 考查非谓语动词．本句主句在前面，后面不缺少谓语，应该用现在分词作后置定语，修饰river．
3．are→were 考查时态．前面讲的是过去，所以应该用一般过去时态．
4．years→year，考查名词单复数．all year round是固定短语，一整年的意思，不用复数形式．
5．去掉been．考查语态格式．take place是不及物动词词组，不能用被动语态，所以去掉been．
6．after→since 考查连词．前面用的是现在完成时态，所以应该用从属连词since．
7a→the 考查冠词．前面出现过的单数可数名词，又一次出现时应该加the．
8．terrible→terribly考查副词．修饰谓语动词，所以用副词形式．
9．takes→take 考查动词形式．情态动词后面应该用动词原形．
10．prevent后面加them．考查代词．prevent是及物动词，后面缺少宾语，前面是the surroundings，所以后面加them．
点评 改错题要注意代词，连词以及词性、人称的转化．
做好短文改错题，可以从以下三方面去考虑：1．快速阅读短文，如抓住中心思想，从整体上对短文有个了解． 2．充分运用语言的基础知识，从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发，进行分析判断，尽快找出错误在何处． 3．重视整体和语境，从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组，判断是递进关系还是转折关系，是因果关系还是让步关系．
How should we behave when you meet someone for the first time？An American shakes your hand firmly while looking you straight in the eye．In many part of Asia，there is no physical contact （接触）at all．In Japan，you should bow，and the more respect you want to show，The deeper you should bow．In Thailand，people greet each other by pressing both hands together at the chest，In both countries，eye contact is avoided as a sign of respect．
Many country have rules about what you should and shouldn't wear．In Muslim countries，you shouldn't reveal （显露）the body，especially women，who Should wear long blouses and skirts．In Korea，you should take off your shoes when entering a house Remember to place then neatly together where you came in．
In Spain，lunch is often the biggest meal of the day，and can last two or three hours．For this reason many people eat a light breakfast and a late dinner．In Mexico，Lunch is the time to relax，and many people prefer not to discuss business as they eat，In Britain，it's not unusual to have a business meeting over breakfast．
In most countries，an exchange of business cards is necessary for all introductions．You should include your company name and your position．If you are going to a country where your language is not widely spoken，you can get the back side of your card printed in the local language．In China，you may present your card with the writing facing the person you are giving it to．
| Title：good（76）Manners | ||
| Aspect | Country | Custom |
| （77）Greeting | •America •Japan •Thailand | •Shaking hands firmly •（78）Bowingto show respect |
| Dressing | （79）MusilimCountries •Korea | •Wearing long blouses and skirts •Taking off your shoes at the （80）entrance |
| Eating | •Spain •Mexico （82）Britain | •Having a light breakfast and a late dinner •Relaxing while having （81）lunch •Holding a business meeting over breakfast |
| Doing business | •Most countries •China | •Exchanging business cards when（83）introducingyourself •Presenting a card to a person （84）withit's front facing him |
| Conclusion：When traveling（85）abroad，we should follow local customs． | ||
Next Thursday is the World Book Day-a celebration of all things wonderful about books for all ages，with author events，school fancy-dress parades and a￡1book token（优惠券） given to all schoolchildren under 18．
| A． | measure | B． | upstairs | C． | respect | D． | sugar |