假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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17．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Our school lies on the foot of a mountain with a small river passes by in front．It used to look like a beautiful garden．In the garden there are ever-green trees and all kinds of flowers in the school yard all years round．
But great changes have been taken place after a chemical factory was built near our school a year ago．It produces various poisonous gases and pours a lot of waste water into a river．This has terrible polluted the surroundings of our school．
I think that the local government must takes steps to protect our surroundings and prevent from being polluted．

分析文章大意：本文主要介绍了我们的学校．我们的学校位于山脚下，前面有一条小河经过．我们学校过去像一个美丽的花园．花园里全年都有绿色的花草树木．但是一年前一个化工厂建在我们学校附近，产生了各种有毒气体，往河里倾倒各种污水．作者希望政府必须采取措施保护我们周围的环境，防止被污染．

解答 Our school lies on the foot of a mountain with a small river passes by in front．It used to look like a beautiful garden．In the garden there are ever-green
                      at                                                               passing                                                                                                        were
trees and all kinds of flowers in the school yard all years round．
                                                                           year
But great changes have been taken place after a chemical factory was built near our school a year ago．It produces various poisonous gases and pours a lot of
                                    去掉                  since
waste water into a river．This has terrible polluted the surroundings of our school．
                         the                    terribly
I think that the local government must takes steps to protect our surroundings and prevent∧from being polluted．
                                                       take                                                                     them
1．on→at 考查介词搭配．at the foot of在山脚下．用介词at．
2．passes→passing 考查非谓语动词．本句主句在前面，后面不缺少谓语，应该用现在分词作后置定语，修饰river．
3．are→were 考查时态．前面讲的是过去，所以应该用一般过去时态．
4．years→year，考查名词单复数．all year round是固定短语，一整年的意思，不用复数形式．
5．去掉been．考查语态格式．take place是不及物动词词组，不能用被动语态，所以去掉been．
6．after→since 考查连词．前面用的是现在完成时态，所以应该用从属连词since．
7a→the 考查冠词．前面出现过的单数可数名词，又一次出现时应该加the．
8．terrible→terribly考查副词．修饰谓语动词，所以用副词形式．
9．takes→take 考查动词形式．情态动词后面应该用动词原形．
10．prevent后面加them．考查代词．prevent是及物动词，后面缺少宾语，前面是the surroundings，所以后面加them．

点评改错题要注意代词，连词以及词性、人称的转化．
做好短文改错题，可以从以下三方面去考虑：1．快速阅读短文，如抓住中心思想，从整体上对短文有个了解． 2．充分运用语言的基础知识，从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发，进行分析判断，尽快找出错误在何处． 3．重视整体和语境，从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组，判断是递进关系还是转折关系，是因果关系还是让步关系．

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8．The Calgary Public Library has some great resources to beat boredom and keep your children busy over the summer，whether at home or on the road．
During the school year children are busy with homework and required reading，so summer is a great time for them to relax and read what they choose．Not only is reading a pleasurable way to pass the time，it will also help children keep their skills up over the summer，so they are prepared to go back to school in the fall．
If you are taking a trip this summer，why not let the kids help out with the planning？Borrow a children's atlas （地图集） to choose your way together and check out some books about your destination before departure．The All about Provinces and Territories series is full of interesting facts about each Canadian province．
Going camping？How about taking along some scary stories to tell around the campfire？Alvin Schwarz's collections of Scary Tales to Tell in the Dark are sure to make your spine tingle and your teeth chatter．For something a little less horrible，try Velcome：a Very Scary Book，by Kevin O'Malley，which includes such horrors as a plate of mixed vegetables!
Remember to lead by example and pack a book in your own beach bag．If children see you reading，they will understand that books are an important and valuable part of summer and they will begin to copy your habits!
The staff at the Calgary Public Library are always happy to help find that perfect summer read，so stop by your nearest branch，call us at 260-2600，or visit our website at calgarypubliclibrary．com today．

25．What can we infer from the second paragraph of the passage？B
A．Summer is the only time for children to relax themselves．?
B．Children have little time to read what they choose at school．
C．Children usually get bored of reading during the school year．
D．Required reading prepares children to go back to school in the fall．
26．If you want your children to have a good knowledge of Canada before a trip，you
had better refer toA．?
A．All about Provinces and Territories
B．Scary Tales to Tell in the Dark
C．Velcome：a Very Scary Book
D．A Children's Atlas
27．What's the probable meaning of the underlined part"to make your spine tingle and your teeth chatter"in Paragraph 4？B
A．To interest you and impress you．
B．To excite you and frighten you．
C．To embarrass you and annoy you．
D．To discourage you and disgust you．
28．You should take a book with you toC．
A．save your own time
B．enjoy your summer holiday
C．set a good example to your children
D．follow your children's good habits．

5．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Thank you for sending to me the Schedule for Summer English Courses．As for me choice，I'd prefer a six-week course for 75hours of study，these would allow me to have more time to see our beautiful country while learning English．I would like to do any traveling and try to make few new friends．Above all I can afford the tuition．
I had been learning English for 6years and I can listen，speak，read or write in English．I hope to improve my speaking English as many as possible．I want to know better about English custom．I believe I will have a wonderful time．

12．下面是一段短文，请你对其进行修改．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
The other day，I go to the supermarket．Convinced what the rain would keep most people at home，I was surprising to see the place was crowded with shoppers．Every one checkout was jammed．However，I didn't feel worried．I parked my cart behind five others but pulled out my vocabulary builder．Within a few second，I was totally absorbed．Rather than being angry at the 15minutes it took me advance to the cashier，I kept 20words on mind．My story tells him that the more the world demands that I wait，the much I learn from my waiting library．

1．Traveling to all corners of the world gets easier and easier．We live in a global village，but this doesn't mean that we all behave in the same way．
How should we behave when you meet someone for the first time？An American shakes your hand firmly while looking you straight in the eye．In many part of Asia，there is no physical contact （接触）at all．In Japan，you should bow，and the more respect you want to show，The deeper you should bow．In Thailand，people greet each other by pressing both hands together at the chest，In both countries，eye contact is avoided as a sign of respect．
Many country have rules about what you should and shouldn't wear．In Muslim countries，you shouldn't reveal （显露）the body，especially women，who Should wear long blouses and skirts．In Korea，you should take off your shoes when entering a house Remember to place then neatly together where you came in．
In Spain，lunch is often the biggest meal of the day，and can last two or three hours．For this reason many people eat a light breakfast and a late dinner．In Mexico，Lunch is the time to relax，and many people prefer not to discuss business as they eat，In Britain，it's not unusual to have a business meeting over breakfast．
In most countries，an exchange of business cards is necessary for all introductions．You should include your company name and your position．If you are going to a country where your language is not widely spoken，you can get the back side of your card printed in the local language．In China，you may present your card with the writing facing the person you are giving it to．

Title：good（76）Manners
Aspect	Country	Custom
（77）Greeting	•America •Japan •Thailand	•Shaking hands firmly •（78）Bowingto show respect
Dressing	（79）MusilimCountries •Korea	•Wearing long blouses and skirts •Taking off your shoes at the （80）entrance
Eating	•Spain •Mexico （82）Britain	•Having a light breakfast and a late dinner •Relaxing while having （81）lunch •Holding a business meeting over breakfast
Doing business	•Most countries •China	•Exchanging business cards when（83）introducingyourself •Presenting a card to a person （84）withit's front facing him
Conclusion：When traveling（85）abroad，we should follow local customs．

5．

Next Thursday is the World Book Day-a celebration of all things wonderful about books for all ages，with author events，school fancy-dress parades and a￡1book token（优惠券） given to all schoolchildren under 18．
Sometimes，reading a modern novel can be tough （Booker Prize-winner The Luminaries ran t0 832pages!），especially if you lack confidence in your literacy skills．In fact，one in six people in the UK never pick up a book because they've experienced difficulties or are out of the habit of reading for pleasure．

But the Galaxy Quick Reads series are designed to introduce reluctant readers to bestselling short funny novels，which bring the joy of reading without demanding hours of concentrated time．They cover a range of subjects，from romance to comedy．
You can read Jojo Moyes's Paris For One，a romantic adventure in which 26-year-old Nell books a weekend away to Paris with her lazy，neglectful boyfriend．When he fails to turn up，she is alone in the city． That is，until she meets Fabien，who shows her the charms of the
French capital-in more ways than one．

Meanwhile，Adele Geras's moving story Out InThe Dark was set in World War I，in which young Rob came back from the battlefields．Determined to find the officer's widow to return the photo of her and their daughter that the captain kept with him，he traveled several thousand miles but never gave up．

Dead Man Talking is a fantastic tale of Pat，who'had a terrible fight with his best friend，Joe，ten years ago-but now hears that Joe is dead，and he must attend his funeral．But Joe is not going quietly that good night-he's lying in his coffin being very chatty indeed．

21．What will happen on the World Book Day according to the poster？B
A．Schoolchildren will be given fine clothes as gifts．
B．The authors of books will attend some events．
C．Experts will encourage people to write their novels．
D．There's a range of books that are priced at just￡l．
22．If you are interested in a horror story，you may chooseC．
A．Galaxy Quick Reads
B．Paris For One
C．Dead Man Talking
D．Out In The Dark
23．The passage is mainly aboutA．
A．recommendation of good books to readers
B．the history of the World Book Day 2015
C．advice on how to get cheap books
D．a plan to develop the habit of reading among adults．

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