题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事,请阅读启事,并根据写作要点写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms. Chen at www. chenlaoshi@163.com.
要点:1. 陈述应征目的;
2. 说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。
注意: 1. 字数100词左右;
2. 可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Ms. Chen,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Grade 3. ____________________________________________
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ms. Chen,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Grade 3. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是提纲类作文,要点已给出。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯,同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
亮点说明:本文内容齐全,结构严谨,层次分明,布局合理,语言精练,同时运用高级句子。such...that句型的使用:I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.非限制性定语从句的使用:I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.条件状语从句的使用:I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.