题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Tom想了解一下2019年国庆70周年阅兵时的一些信息,请给他写一封信。
内容包括:1.时间、地点;2.阅兵目的;3.观看感受。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
提示:the military parade the 70th anniversary
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【答案】Dear Tom,
In your last letter, you asked me for several details about the military parade for China's 70th anniversary. So I am writing to provide you some related information.
It is well-known that this military parade was held on 1st, December, 2019 on Beijing's Tian'anmen Square, in which China's national strength was displayed to the whole world. In addition, the success of this parade strengthened Chinese citizens' confidence for their own country. To be honest, this event was extraordinarily attractive and great. What impressed me most were the soldiers' spirit, the consistency of movements and those advanced weapons. With so powerful a nation as our support, I firmly believe that our common people are bound to live a happy and harmony life.
All the above are my opinions. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本文属于应用文,要求写一封信介绍国庆阅兵情况。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1.表明写目的:给对方介绍国庆阅兵的相关信息
2.具体的内容:1.时间、地点;2.阅兵目的;3.观看感受。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
the military parade; on 1st, December, 2019; Beijing's Tian'anmen Square; is displayed to; in addition,; to be honest; the consistency of movements; I firmly believe that.
第三步:连词成句
In your last letter, you asked me for several details about the military parade for China’s 70th anniversary.
I am writing to provide you some related information.
It is well-known that this military parade is held on 1st, December, 2019 at Beijing's Tian'anmen Square, from which China’s national strength is displayed to the whole world.
the success of this parade strengthen Chinese citizens’ confidence for their own country.
What impressed me most is soldiers’ spirit, the consistency of movements and those advanced weapons.
With so powerful a nation as our support, I firmly believe that our common people are bound to live a happy and harmony life.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改