Question

【题目】随着人们生活水平提高，越来越多的人喜爱旅游度假。最近你班学生就假期旅游的利弊问题进行了一次调查，请就调查结果写一篇短文，内容主要有：

1.假期旅游的好处：工作之余放松；开阔眼界丰富知识。

2.假期旅游的坏处：污染环境；造成交通问题。

3.你的观点。

注意: 1.词数120左右；

2.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数；

3.可适当用语，以使行文连贯

With people’s lives becoming richer and richer，

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Answer 1

【答案】

With people’s lives becoming richer and richer, more and more people love travelling to spend their holiday. We have made a survey on it in our class recently. Different students have different ideas.

Most of the students hold the view that it has many advantages to travel. Firstly, we can have an access to relax ourselves. Secondly, travelling different places, we can broaden our mind and enrich our knowledge.

However, some students believe that people’s travelling does great harm to the environment. In addition, so many people travel at the same time, which naturally causes traffic problems.

In my opinion, every coin has two sides. While we’re on holiday, we’d better be careful to avoid polluting the environment. Then we can enjoy ourselves.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语make a survey做调查；have an access to有做某事的机会；do harm to 对，，有害；In addition此外；in one’s opinion在某人看来；Most of the students hold the view that it has many advantages to travel.这个句子that引导view的同位从句；In addition, so many people travel at the same time, which naturally causes traffic problems这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句；