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【题目】随着高考的临近，部分住校生要求搬出学生宿舍，在学校附近租房子住。请你根据下表提供的内容，写一篇英语短文，阐述学生和家长的观点，并表达自己的看法。

现象 高三部分住校生搬离学生宿舍，在学校附近租房住 观点 多数学生 1.宿舍吵闹，影响学习和休息2.熄灯制度限定了学习时间 许多家长 1．提供好的学习环境2．方便照顾饮食起居 你的看法 ……

注意： 1．陈述所有要点，可适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2．词数120—150（开头已写好，不计入总词数）。

3．参考词汇：熄灯制度—blackout rule

With the college entrance examination approaching day by day, some senior three students are moving out from their dorms and living in a rented apartment near their schools.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

With the college entrance examination approaching day by day, some senior three students are moving out from their dorms and living in a rented apartment near their schools.

Most students think although school dorms bring them fun and friendship, the blackout rule to guarantee students sleeping hours doesn't leave them enough time to finish homework．Worse still, the noise in the dorms not only influences their studies but also ruins their rest．To many parents, they'd like to provide a better environment for their children so that they can study more efficiently．Besides, they can take care of their children's daily meals and laundry, so their children can eat better and have a comfortable life．

In my opinion, whether a student should rent a house outside his school depends on his need．I am in favor of renting a house for the sake of study．After all, time is pressing．But I strongly recommend that parents should care much about their children while they are outside school．

【解析】

试题分析：

本篇书面表达属于议论文类写作，根据提示信息要求来展开。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。本文要求就高三学生在临近毕业时是否应该在校外租房一事，说明多数学生以及家长的看法，还有你的观点；2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文应该分三部分：高三部分住校生在校外租房的现象；他们及其家长的看法；你的看法。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态和人称。本文应该用一般现在时，以主动语态为主，第三人称说明学生及家长的看法和第一人称表明自己对此事的观点； 要灵活运用各种短语和从句来丰富文章的内容。

式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如although引导让步状语从句和recommend后的从句谓语用should加动词原形表建议。 此外，文章还使用了大量短语not only ... but also, depends on, in favor of，for the sake of 等。插入语Worse still，Besides，In my opinion，After all和so, but, while的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。