Answer 1

Dear Peter,

       Sorry I haven’t written to you for a long time. I was lucky to be a volunteer in the Olympic Games. I’ve learned a lot from the volunteer work.

       Before the Olympic Games, all of us received special training. Under the guidance of the trainer, we got to know what jobs we could do and what we should pay attention to.

       During the Games, some of us stood outside the stadium, guiding the audience to go into the Bird’s Nest with loudspeakers. Some worked at the information center and offered all kinds of help. Others acted as tour guides and took foreigners to some places of interest, such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace, which helped them to get a better understanding of Chinese culture.

       Being a volunteer was a valuable experience for me. Not only did I help others, but also I made many friends. Besides, I felt I could do something for our country.

       The 2012 Olympic Games will be held in London. Would you like to be a volunteer as well? Please tell me your plan in your next letter.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

解析:

根据图画将文章的要点概括完整，内容充实而丰富，结构紧凑，有层次感；要用词十分恰当，段落过渡自然。写出内涵意思，本文最大的特点就是想象力十分丰富，文章要有血有肉，无论是长短句的搭配，还是从句的使用，都要做到恰当。