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10．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play．All over the world men and woman，boys and girls enjoy sports．Since long ago，many adults and children called their friends together to spend hours，even days play games．One of the reasons why people like to play is that sports help them to live happy．In another words，they help to keep people strong．When people play games，they move a lot．That is how sports are good activities for their health．Having fun with their friends make them delighted．Many people enjoy sports by watching the others play．In big American cities，thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games．

分析 每个人都喜欢玩．世界上的男女老少都喜欢运动，因为运动不但可以让人开心还可以增强体质．人们也喜欢看别人运动，比如看球赛．

解答 Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play．All over the world men and woman，boys and girls enjoy sports．Since long ago，many adults and children∧called their friends together to spend hours，even days play games．One of the reasons why people like to play is that sports help them to live happy．In another words，they help to keep people strong．When people play games，they move a lot．That is how sports are good activities for their health．Having fun with their friends make them delighted．Many people enjoy sports by watching the others play．In big American cities，thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games．
详解：
1．and改为but；连词错误．句意表达的是转折，不是并列．  
2．woman改为women；名词错误．句意表达的是泛指，要用名词的复数形式．  
3．加have；时态错误．句中since引导时间状语，表示从过去到现在，是现在完成时态的用法；主语是复数，要添加助动词have来构成．  
4．play改为playing；动词搭配错误．spend some time（in）doing sth花时间做某事．  
5．happy改为happily；副词错误．句中happy修饰动词live，要用副词形式．  
6．another改为other；短语搭配错误．in other words换句话说，固定短语．  
7．how改为why；连词错误．句意表达的是原因，不是方式．  
8．make改为makes；主谓一致错误．句中是动名词短语作主语，谓语动词要用单数．  
9．去掉the；冠词错误．句中others表示泛指，不用定冠词．   
10．sell改为buy；逻辑错误．句意表达的是成千上万的人买票看球赛．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．

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