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2．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
    删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
          2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Mary，
I'm glad to hear of you．Learning that you had developed a deep interest in Tang poems．I feel happiness and proud and I'd like to give you a brief introduction to them．
In China，Tang poems are popular with the people of all ages．The Tang dynasty is common recognized as the golden age of poetry．During this period，a lot of excellent poems was written．Tang poems are easy to read but recite．Some of them have translated into many foreign languages．
Now that you are interesting in Tang poems，I will send you the collection of Tang poems by post．I hope you will love it．
Best wishes!
     Yours，
     Li Hua．

分析 本文主要讲述作者向Mary介绍中国的唐诗．唐诗在中国受到各个年龄段人的欢迎，容易读和背诵，一些被翻译成了多种外文．如果Mary喜欢唐诗，作者会邮寄给她一本唐诗集．

解答 Dear Mary，
I'm glad to hear of you．Learning that you had developed a deep interest in Tang poems．I feel happiness and proud and I'd like to give you a brief introduction to them．
In China，Tang poems are popular withthe people of all ages．The Tang dynasty is common recognized as the golden age of poetry．During this period，a lot of excellent poems was written．Tang poems are easy to read but recite．Some of them have∧translated into many foreign languages．
Now that you are interesting in Tang poems，I will send you the collection of Tang poems by post．I hope you will love it．
Best wishes!
     Yours，
     Li Hua．
详解：
1．of改为from 考查词语用法．hear of意为"听说"，hear from意为"收到…的来信"，此处应是：收到…的来信．
2．had改为have 考查动词时态．develop虽发生在过去，但对现在造成了影响，用现在完成时态．
3．happiness改为happy 考查形容词．feel是连系动词，后接形容词作表语．
4．去掉the 考查冠词．此处people表示泛指，不需要加定冠词the．
5．common改为commonly 考查副词．recognize是动词，要用副词修饰．
6．was改为were 考查主谓一致．主语poems是复数，谓语动词也应用复数were．
7．but改为and 考查连词．动词read和recite是并列关系，用连词and．
8．加been 考查动词语态．主语Some of them和translate之间是动宾关系，用现在完成时的被动语态．
9．interesting改为interested 考查固定搭配．be interested in意为"对…感兴趣"，是固定搭配．
10．the改为a 考查冠词．根据句意：我会邮寄给你一本唐诗集．用不定冠词a，表示泛指．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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