题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was walking my dog around my local streets last Sunday when I meet a new couple. They liked my dog but gave it a sandwich. I thanked them and had a chat to them. They said they had just been moved into the community. Unfortunate, they had a troublesome neighbour that was rather noisy at night, making it hard for them to fall asleep. "Oh, it,s great pity. I think I' m quite lucky to have kind neighbours, "I said.
Say out goodbyes, we separated. As I and my dog was near my home, I was embarrassed to see that my new friends were walking towards the house next to me. I was thee noisy neighbour!
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【解析】
这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了我带着狗散步时,认识了一对新搬来的夫妇。我们聊天时,得知他们有一个晚上相当吵闹的讨厌邻居。当我和我的狗靠近我家时,我尴尬地看到我的新朋友正走向我房子旁边的房子,原来我就是那个讨厌的邻居。
第一处:考查时态。根据时间状语last Sunday,可知是发生在过去的事情,用一般过去时,所以meet改成met。
第二处:考查连词。句意:他们喜欢我的狗,并且给了它一块三明治。文中表示并列关系,所以but改成and。
第三处:考查语态。they had just moved into the community.作said的宾语,所以they had just moved into the community.是一个宾语从句。在宾语从句中,“他们”和“搬到”之间是主动关系,用主动语态,所以去掉been。
第四处:考查副词。句意:不幸的是,他们有一个晚上相当吵闹的讨厌邻居。修饰整个句子,用副词,所以Unfortunate改成Unfortunately。
第五处:考查非限制性定语从句。who was rather noisy at night作定语,修饰a troublesome neighbour,逗号把主从句隔开,所以who was rather noisy at night是一个非限制性定语从句,关系词在从句中作主语,指人,that不能引导非限制性定语从句,所以that改成who。
第六处:考查冠词。句意:这是一个巨大的遗憾。泛指“一个遗憾”,great的首字母发音是元音,所以填不定冠词a。
第七处:考查非谓语动词。Say的逻辑主语是we,它们之间是主动关系,用现在分词作状语,所以say改成saying。
第八处:考查主谓一致。句意:当我和我的狗靠近我家时,我尴尬地看到我的新朋友正走向我房子旁边的房子。文中“我和我的狗”是复数,所以was改成were。
第九处:考查物主代词。句意:当我和我的狗靠近我家时,我尴尬地看到我的新朋友正走向我房子旁边的房子。文中表示“我的房子”,后面没有名词,用名词性物主代词,所以me改成mine。