Question

【题目】假如你是学生李华，是你校英文报的一名记者，你打算为校报写—篇英语报道，介绍“爱心回收活动”。要点如下：

1. 基本信息：① 送达和收集时间：每周四下午5点至6点；

② 收集种类：废纸、塑料瓶、旧书等；

③ 地点：学校门口；

④ 参与人员：所有老师和学生。

2. 资金用途：卖废品所获资金将上交学校爱心基金，帮助贫困学生。

3. 你的看法。

注意：1. 词数100左右，可适当增加细节和展开想象，以使行文连贯；

2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数；

3. 参考词汇：爱心回收活动the Love Recycling Activity;

爱心基金the Love Fund.

Now I’d like to tell you something about the Love Recycling Activity.

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Answer 1

【答案】Now I'd like to tell you something about the Love Recycling Activity．The activity is being conducted in our school．（点明主题）Not only students but also teachers are welcome to take part in the activity．If you have such unwanted materials like waste paper，plastic bottles and old books，you can take them to the school gate．（高分句型）There will be some people who are in charge of collecting the waste materials between 5 and 6 every Thursday afternoon．（高分句型）The money made by selling the collected waste will be turned in to the Love Fund of our school to help the poor students．（基本信息）

As far as I am concerned，not only can the activity help save natural resources，but also it is one effective measure to protect the environment．（高分句型）Moreover，this activity will surely arouse students'awareness of environment protection and students will understand how much one loving heart means．（高分句型）

【解析】本文是一篇提纲作文，要求为校报写—篇英语报道，介绍“爱心回收活动”。根据提示信息可知，本文应该用第一人称，一般现在时为主。写作时要注意要点齐全，适当增加细节和展开想象，使文章内容丰满完整。此外，为了提高文章档次，还要注意使用多种句式和高级词汇，并添加关联词让行文流畅。

【亮点说明】

本文表达格式规范，语言流畅。一开头点明主题，介绍基本信息，第二段提出自己的看法，是一篇完整且流畅的佳作。此外，多变的句式和高级词汇的运用给文章增色不少，如状语从句和定语从句，not only… but also引导的并列且倒装句等。as far as I am concerned, not only … but also…, meanwhile等表示关联的句式和词汇又使得文章连贯紧凑。