题目内容
15.假定在英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改l0处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
On a snowy winter night,a bus with 45passenger had an accident because of the wet road.And all of them were trapping in the bus and what was worse,the bus ran out of gas and it is very cold in it.They could do nothing but to wait for help.A man who lived nearby saw what happened.He and some villagers managed to open the door and helped all of them out of bus.He took them to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children.They spent two days in their home and finally helps came.All of them were thankful with his help.
分析 一个下雪的冬天的晚上,一辆载着45人的公共汽车由于路面湿发生了事故,乘客都困在了车里,车里很冷,只能等待救援.附近住的一个人看到发生的这一切,就和其他村民设法帮助乘客从车上逃出来,并把乘客带回家提供食物和水,并给一些衣服.乘客在他家度过了两天,直到最后有人来救援.
解答 On a snowy winter night,a bus with 45passenger had an accident because of the wet road.And all of them were trapping in the bus and what was worse,the bus ran out of gas and it is very cold in it.They could do nothing but to wait for help.A man who lived nearby saw what∧happened.He and some villagers managed to open the door and helped all of them out of∧bus.He took them to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children.They spent two days in their home and finally helps came.All of them were thankful with his help.
详解:
1.passenger改为passengers;考查名词的单复数,passenger是可数名词,前面有数量词45,故用复数形式.
2.trapping改为trapped;考查动词的语态,此处用过去分词trapped与前面的were构成被动语态,指"所有乘客都被困在车里".
3.is改为was;考查动词的时态,本文讲的过去的事情,故用一般过去时.
4.去掉to;考查动词不定式,当句子中出现nothing but时,如果nothing but前有do,后面就不加to,相反,如果前面没有do,则nothing but 后就要加to,所以本句中要去掉to.
5.happened前面加had;考查动词的时态,这是一个宾语从句,主句的动词用了过去时saw,所有从句的动作应该是发生在过去的过去,故加had构成过去完成时.
6.bus前面加the;考查定冠词,此处用在bus前加定冠词the表示特指,特指上文提到的那辆公共汽车.
7.but改为and;考查连词,分析句意为"把乘客带回家提供食物和水…",所以用and表示并列.
8.their改为his;考查形容词性物主代词,分析句义为"乘客在他家度过了两天",故用his.
9.helps改为help;考查名词,help在这里用作名词,意为"帮助,救援",是不可数名词,没有复数形式,故把helps改为help.
10.with改为for;考查介词,be thankful for 是固定搭配,意为"感谢…,对…感激".
点评 整体理解短文,把握短文的中心思想;分析句式结构和句群之间的关系,从语法,句式,短语搭配等多方面分析短文内容,找出文中的错误.这里主要考查基础知识的运用.

--Oh,really?I _____ know.I _____ go and visit her.( )
A. | didn't:am going to | B. | don't;would | ||
C. | didn't:will | D. | don't;will |
A. | indicated | B. | promised | C. | supported | D. | predicted |
A. | Would | B. | Can | C. | Shall | D. | Need |
On the last day of our (38)B,I found myself (39)B on a busy corner across the street from our hotel.Bicycles and motorbikes rushed in front of me.We had been advised to walk(40)C through the heavy traffic without looking right or left.Let them (41)A us.But tonight I was by myself and felt (42)B to face the stream of vehicles.(43)C I hesitated on the sidewalk,I felt a hand on my elbow and looked down to see the smile of my small beggar friend looking up at me.She nodded her head toward the street,(44)D that she would take me across.Together,we moved slowly into the chaos.
Then we moved on (45)D the sidewalk,where she pulled my face down to hers,kissed me on both cheeks,and then walked away,still smiling and waving back to me.I had not given her a single coin.We had (46)B something vastly more important-a warming of hearts in friendship.
Traveling in poorer nations,I have (47)D a variety of ways to deal with beggars.The most (48)D response of tourists faced with those extremely poor people is to (49)A them and focus their eyes elsewhere.I have seen people push away an outstretched hand in (50)C.A few may hurriedly drop a few coins,and then make a quick getaway in hopes that another 20ragged beggars won't immediately appear on the (51)D.
For many reasons,giving money is not the best (52)Bto an outstretched hand.The greatest gift is time and respect.To look beggars in the eye and smile,thus acknowledging their existence,is a small thing.Putting your hand into another's outstretched hand and grasping it (53)Afor a moment is also a small thing.But these are important.Everyone needs (54)A,to be seen as worthy of being (55)D,to feel appreciated and loved.And I believe that everyone is worthy and worth knowing.
36.A.met | B.opened | C.turned | D.dropped |
37.A.attempted | B.wanted | C.managed | D.failed |
38.A.work | B.visit | C.camp | D.festival |
39.A.free | B.alone | C.lost | D.exposed |
40.A.away | B.off | C.straight | D.about |
41.A.avoid | B.stop | C.lead | D.direct |
42.A.unwilling | B.inadequate | C.inappropriate | D.unfit |
43.A.Since | B.Although | C.As | D.Before |
44.A.hoping | B.considering | C.concluding | D.indicating |
45.A.across | B.off | C.along | D.towards |
46.A.earned | B.shared | C.expected | D.undertaken |
47.A.changed | B.followed | C.possessed | D.witnessed |
48.A.initial | B.automatic | C.aggressive | D.common |
49.A.ignore | B.oppose | C.tolerate | D.scold |
50.A.anxiety | B.desperation | C.annoyance | D.sadness |
51.A.street | B.corner | C.way | D.scene |
52.A.result | B.response | C.reward | D.reply |
53.A.firmly | B.casually | C.cautiously | D.eagerly |
54.A.recognition | B.encouragement | C.motivation | D.commitment |
55.A.liked | B.trusted | C.accepted | D.known. |