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20．假定你是李华，上个月你从外教Mr．Brown那里借了一本海明威（Hemingway）的小说《老人与海》（The  Old Man and the Sea），但不慎将书丢失．为此请你给Mr．Brown写一封道歉信．信的内容包括：
（1）道歉
（2）说明丢失原因
（3）提出补救措施
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Mr．Brown，
I'm writing this letter to make an apology to you forlosing the book"The old man and the sea"by Hemingway you lent to me last month．（高分句型一）
I really appreciate the novel．However，I didn't keep it properly as promised．I was so careless that I left it to the city public library．（高分句型二）I've been looking for it，but in vain．Feeling awfully sorry，I've bought a new one to make up for my fault．I hope you can forgive me for my carelessness．What's more．I've heard that you are interested in Chinese Tang poems，so I've also bought a"300 Tang Poems"for any inconvenience it may cause to you．（高分句型三）
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息上个月你从外教Mr．Brown那里借了一本海明威（Hemingway）的小说《老人与海》（The  Old Man and the Sea），但不慎将书丢失．为此请你给Mr．Brown写一封道歉信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：（1）道歉（2）说明丢失原因
（3）提出补救措施 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态 4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：make an apology to向…道歉；However然而；look for寻找； in vain徒劳的；make up for弥补；What's more而且；
I'm writing this letter to make an apology to you for losing the book"The old man and the sea"by Hemingway you lent to me last month．（高分句型一）
However，I didn't keep it properly as promised．I was so careless that I left it to the city public library．（高分句型二）
What's more．I've heard that you are interested in Chinese Tang poems，so I've also bought a"300 Tang Poems"for any inconvenience it may cause to you．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr．Brown，
     I'm writing this letter to make an apology to you for losing the book"The old man and the sea"by Hemingway you lent to me last month．（高分句型一）
     I really appreciate the novel．However，I didn't keep it properly as promised．I was so careless that I left it to the city public library．（高分句型二）I've been looking for it，but in vain．Feeling awfully sorry，I've bought a new one to make up for my fault．I hope you can forgive me for my carelessness．What's more．I've heard that you are interested in Chinese Tang poems，so I've also bought a"300 Tang Poems"for any inconvenience it may cause to you．（高分句型三）
      Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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