Question

5．假设你是高二学生李华．你和朋友在学校附近的一家美国人开的西餐厅吃饭，上菜前等了很长时间；上菜后发现味道过咸；向服务员要水时，服务员态度不好．所以你决定给餐厅老板写一封投诉信．
注意：
1．词数不少于100字；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出．
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm sorry to trouble you，but                                                       
I'm looking forward to your solving the problem．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封投诉信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称，用一般过去时表示投诉发生的内容，用一般现在时表示建议和要求．内容包括：一点明书信目的；二叙述事情经过；三提出建议．
高分句型：
1．Though there were not many customers in the restaurant when we were there，we waited for almost an hour before we were served．句子里Though引导让步状语从句，表示"尽管"；when是让步状语从句里的时间状语从句；before we were served是主句的时间状语从句．
尽管我们去那里的时候客人不多，我们在上菜前还是等了很长时间．
2．However，the waiter we asked just told us in an unfriendly way that it was not his duty to serve us water．句子里 we asked 是the waiter 的定语从句，表示"我们问的那个服务员"；that it was not his duty to serve us water是 told us 的宾语从句．
可是，我们向服务员要水时，那个服务员态度不好，说那不是他的职责．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm sorry to trouble you，but I'd like to make a complaint．（点明书信目的）
Today I had lunch with my friends in your restaurant and I felt quite unhappy．Though there were not many customers in the restaurant when we were there，we waited for almost an hour before we were served．【高分句型一】When we finally got our lunch，we found that the food was so salty that we had to ask for some water．However，the waiter we asked just told us in an unfriendly way that it was not his duty to serve us water．【高分句型二】（叙述事情经过）
In my opinion，you are expect ed to offer not just food，but also good customer service．Anyway，everyone likes to enjoy their food in a pleasant atmosphere．I believe more people will go to your restaurant if you can improve your service．（提出建议）
I'm looking forward to your solving the problem．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 考查开放类作文．
审题时写作的第一步，审查书面表达题干中隐含的读者对象和撰写人，即搞清楚此篇文章是"由谁写给谁"的．写稿人是谁一般都已明确指出，给出形式假设环境中的"某人"，如"假设你是李华"，写作时即用第一人称"我"，即李华．而读者对象有时没有明示，要考生自己去进行判断．