Question

【题目】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

My brother and I were alone at home because my parents had gone for a meeting and they had left me in charge. I was doing my homework while my younger brother was watching TV. Suddenly the doorbell rang. My younger brother rushed to the door thinking that our parents had come home, he unlocked the door and opened it.

Outside stood a tall man wearing a black raincoat and black rubber boots. He said he was a salesman and asked politely if out mother or father was at home.

Without thinking, my brother said:” No.” He asked if we would like to buy some comic books which he was selling. I quickly explained that we were not supposed to buy anything without our parent’s permission.

Then, as I was about to close the door, he forced his way into our house. He took out a knife and forced me to tie up my brother’s hands with some rope which he took out form his pocket. I tied up his hands but tied it in a special way so my brother could untie himself. The man then tied my hands up and locked both of us in the kitchen.

Soon, the went upstairs to search the bedroom for valuables. I managed to teach my brother to untie the rope on the his hands. He then untied me. I rushed to the telephone to call the police, but the line was dead. The doors were all locked from the outside and I did not have the keys to unlock them. Luckily, the robber forgot to lock the kitchen window. My brother managed to get out of the house through the window and I told him to go to the police station nearby and call for help.

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右。

2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语。

3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Answer 1

【答案】After a while, my brother brought the police to our house. The police let us hid somewhere and they went upstairs to catch the robber who was still there searching for valuable things. A few minutes later, there was a big noise and then the rubber was brought downstairs. We were very happy. But we had to go the police station to make a report. There we were told that robber was a wanted criminal who the police have been trying to catch for a long time. The police thanked us for our excellent work.

By the time my parents had come home, they lectured us that, as children, we should see who it was outside out house before opening the door. And we shouldn’t open the door to strangers, especially those who looked highly suspicious. I remembered and I thought I learnt an important lesson on safety and responsibility.

【解析】

试题分析：阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右。2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语。3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】续写部分紧扣主题，结构严谨，高级句式、词汇运用恰如其分。the robber who was still there searching for valuable things.句中使用定语从句；A few minutes later, there was a big noise and then the rubber was brought downstairs.被动语态在句中运用；There we were told that robber was a wanted criminal who the police have been trying to catch for a long time.被动语态、宾语从句和定语从句神奇结合；we should see who it was outside out house before opening the door.连词加现在分词做时间状语。