Question

16．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改． 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词． 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉． 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词． 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Jin Jing，
       Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all，believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next，trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies．Unless anyone is in trouble，you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence，you can make as many friends as possibly．
Yours，
Lily．

Answer 1

分析 这是对一个中学生心理问题进行疏导的书信．
你的问题是中学生里很常见的．首先要相信自己，不要缺乏自信，要对同学微笑；其次可以和跟你一样害羞的同学交朋友；如果有麻烦你要乐于向他们求助．而一旦你有了自信，你会交到很多朋友．

解答 Dear Jin Jing，
       Your problem is∧common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all，believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next，trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or whosharethe same interest as you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies．Unless anyone is in trouble，you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence，you can make as many friends as possibly．
解析：
第一处：在common前加a．考查冠词．本句中one代替problem，泛指一个问题，应加不定冠词a．
第二处：advices→advice．考查名词．advice为不可数名词，没有复数形式．
第三处：in→of．考查介词．first of all为固定短语，意为"首先"．
第四处：把must do it中的it去掉．考查定语从句．先行词The first thing在定语从句里做宾语，省略了关系词that/which．所有把must do it中的it去掉．
第五处：loud→louder．考查形容词的比较级．根据本句中的than可知应用比较级形式，所以用louder．
第六处：him→them．考查代词．此处意为：这表示你对他们很友好．故把him改为them．
第七处：trying→try．考查祈使句．本句为祈使句，以动词原形开头，故把trying改为try．
第八处：share→shares．考查主谓一致关系．本句中who指代a student，故谓语动词应用单数．
第九处：Unless→If．考查状语从句的引导词．本句意为如果别人有麻烦，应用if引导条件状语从句．
第十处：possibly→possible．考查形容词．固定句式as many friends as possible意为"尽可能多的朋友"．

点评 考查短文改错．
关系代词作宾语时的省略：当关系代词在定语从句中用作动词宾语或介词位于句末时的介词宾语时，可以省略．如：
Is there anything （which） you wanted？想要什么东西吗？
Who is the man （that，who，whom） you were talking to？刚才和你讲话的人是谁？
但是，如果是直接用于介词后作宾语，则不可省略．如：
This is the room in which I was born．这是我出生的那间房间．
I wanted to find someone with whom I could discuss music．我想找一个能和我谈音乐的人．