Question

16．请你从如图两幅漫画中任选一幅，通过电子邮件推荐给学校英文校刊，说明漫画主题，根据个人经历，论述推荐理由．

注意：1．词数100字左右；
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯、完整．
Dear Editor，
I'd like to recommend an interesting cartoon．A boy running to his parents after the summer camp ending，says he learend washing，dressing and sleeping alone．This cartoon shows the importance of children's independent and propaganda agood way to educate children．
Nowadays many parents have a common sense that their children are so precious to them so they always try their best to give their children a happy and meaningful life．On one hand，these parents care and protect their children，however，on the other hand they may do harm to their children．
As far as I am concerned，it is necessary that parents should give their children more space and freedom so that their children may become more independent．What's more，it is a good way to let their children join a summer camp for children must face something by their own，such as，their relationship with friends，theircost and saving and so on．A good case in point，parents may encourage their children to take part-time jobs during summer or winter holiday．By doing this，I believe，these children may become more independent，brave and responsible．
In summary，parents should know better that an independent，responsible and brave person is able to adapt society better．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇看图写作让考生选择其一．图一画了一个小男孩参加夏令营而学会了独立生活，图二则讽刺了虚假广告．因此考生应从自己感兴趣和有话可写的一个入手，可以使用举例，或者逻辑分析的方法来丰富作文的内容．注意使用一般现在时，以及恰当的连接词．
重要短语：
 do harm to，对…有害，a good case in point，一个恰当的例子，in summary，总之
高分句子：
As far as I am concerned，it is necessary that parents should give their children more space and freedom so that their children may become more independent．本句含有重要句型，it is necessary that，..是必要的．

解答 I'd like to recommend an interesting cartoon．A boy running to his parents after the summer camp ending，says he learend washing，dressing and sleeping alone．（描述画面内容）This cartoon shows the importance of children's independent and propaganda a good way to educate children．（说明介绍原因）
     Nowadays many parents have a common sense that their children are so precious to them so they always try their best to give their children a happy and meaningful life．On one hand，these parents care and protect their children，however，on the other hand they may do harm to their children．（引出现象）
     As far as I am concerned，it is necessary that parents should give their children more space and freedom so that their children may become more independent．（高分句型）What's more，it is a good way to let their children join  a summer camp for children must face something by their own，such as，their relationship with friends，their cost and saving and so on．A good case in point，parents may encourage their children to take part-time jobs during summer or winter holiday．By doing this，I believe，these children may become more independent，brave and responsible．（叙述自己观点）
     In summary，parents should know better that an independent，responsible and brave person is able to adapt society better．（总结主题）

点评 在完成图表作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体．