题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你校将承办2016年中美中学生夏令营,请你写信给美方代表John,告知活动相关信息并征求对方意见。日程安排如下:
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.参考词汇:中美中学生夏令营Sino-American High School Summer Camp;
4.结语已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear John,
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear John,
Our school will host the 2016 Sino-American High School Summer Camp and you are welcome to participate.
As scheduled, you need to arrive at our school on the morning of July 18th and sort out your accommodations. A wonderful opening ceremony will be held on July 19th. From July 20th to 24th, a series of activities about the cultures of both countries such as Opera Show will be presented, which will undoubtedly leave you an amazing impression and make your experience here unforgettable. As for our arrangements, we’re expecting your proposals to make them better and I’m convinced that we will hold a successful summer camp with our joint efforts.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是提纲类写作,要点已给出。成文时应注意以下几点:(1)内容要点齐全。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态:一般现在时和一般将来时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语,使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型,以增加文章的档次。
【亮点说明】
1.使用高级句型:非限制性定语从句…which will undoubtedly leave you an amazing impression ;将来时的被动语态A wonderful opening ceremony will be held on July 19th.make your experience here unforgettable让你的经历更难忘。
2.使用了重要短语:sort out整理,挑选; as for.关于,至于