题目内容
【题目】假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华。下面四幅图描述了上周五你在放学路上,撞倒一位骑车老人并实施救助的过程。请根据图片的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记。
注意: 1.文章的开头已为你写好;2.词数不少于60。
Last Friday _____________________________________________________________
【答案】
Possible version:
Last Friday, as usual I rode my bike home. But at a crossing, I accidentally knocked an old man off his bike. I hurried over and found his leg was injured. Nervous and worried, I called my mom and told her what had happened. We decided to take him to the hospital first.
Soon after we arrived at the hospital, my mother came. The doctor gave the old man a thorough examination. To our delight and relief, there was nothing seriously wrong with him. We thanked the doctor and left.
After that, we went back to where the bike was parked only to find it didn’t work. So I immediately found a repairman to get it fixed. Before the old man left, my mom offered him our cell phone number in case he needed to contact us. Then the old man got on his bike and we waved goodbye to each other.
The accident made me realize that in the first place we should be careful to avoid accidents, but once they occur, we should take responsibility.
【解析】
试题分析:
本文要求写一封回信,内容是关于上周五你在放学路上,撞倒一位骑车老人并实施救助的过程。写作时注意以下几点:1、认真分析所提供的信息是事情发生的前因后果。2、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般过去时,以第一人称为主。3、注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】
所写内容连贯、结构紧凑,运用了多样的句式和丰富的词汇。比如:Nervous and worried做状语,地点状语从句where the bike was parked 和动词不定式only to find it didn’t work以及 get it fixed还有in case,once等连词有效地使语句间连接紧凑。