题目内容
假如你是李华，曾经在美国留学三年，今年回国。你在Tutor.com网站上看到一则广告——现住北京的美国Smith夫妇想给他们的两个孩子找一个汉语家教。你很感兴趣，随即向Smith夫妇写一封正式英文书信。信的内容包括以下要点：
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Location |
北京 |
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Name |
李华 |
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lh137@hotmail.com |
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Strengths |
● 母语是中文，可以说流利的英语 ● 有家教的经验 ● 热心、诚实、细心…… |
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Questions |
● 工作时间 ● 报酬 |
注意：1. 文章应包括表格里的所有信息，可适当发挥。Strengths（强项）
2. 信件的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
3. 词数：100左右。
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,
I am writing to apply for the job as a tutor, which I saw advertised on the Tutor.com last week. I would be interested in teaching the children Chinese.
I am a native Chinese speaker and I can speak fluent English, because I studied in American for about three years. Due to my language skills, I would have no difficulty in communicating with your children, which is good for teaching. When I was in America, I took a job as a tutor in my spare time, so I know how to help solve the problems in Chinese learning.
I feel that I can get on well with your children since I am always kind to my students. Besides, I am patient with students though sometimes strict with them.
I think I would be the right person you want. But I would like to know how long I shall work and what the payment is. Please contact me. My email is lh137@hotmail.com
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：考查提纲类作文，本文本句简单，要点都已经给了出来，考生只需要翻译即可，在写作的时候注意使用高级的词汇如fluent等，也可以多使用合适的连接词what’s more, besides等，让文章上下文更加流畅，更像是一个整体。同时要变换使用高级句型，以提升文章的层次和档次。
考点：考查提纲类作文
点评：提纲类作文要写出特色是很不容易的，一定要包括全部要点。同时变换使用多种句式，让文章宾语那么的平淡，增加文章的特色。
黄冈创优卷系列答案假如你是李华，曾经在美国留学三年，今年回国。你在Tutor.com网站上看到一则广告——现住北京的美国Smith夫妇想给他们的两个孩子找一个汉语家教。你很感兴趣，随即向Smith夫妇写一封正式英文书信。信的内容包括以下要点：
| Location | 北京 |
| Name | 李华 |
| Email | lh137@hotmail.com |
| Strengths | ●母语是中文，可以说流利的英语 ●有家教的经验 ●热心、开朗、有耐心…… |
| Questions | ●工作时间 ●报酬 |
2. 信件的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
3. 词数：120左右。
| Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith, |
| I am writing to apply for the job as a tutor, which I saw advertised on the Tutor.com last |
| week. I would be interested in teaching the children Chinese. |
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| Looking forward to your reply. |
| Yours sincerely, |
| Li Hua |
假如你是李华，曾经在美国留学三年，今年回国。你在Tutor.com网站上看到一则广告——现住北京的美国Smith夫妇想给他们的两个孩子找一个汉语家教。你很感兴趣，随即向Smith夫妇写一封正式英文书信。信的内容包括以下要点：
| Location | 北京 |
| Name | 李华 |
| Email | lh137@hotmail.com |
| Strengths | ● 母语是中文，可以说流利的英语 ● 有家教的经验 ● 热心、诚实、细心…… |
| Questions | ● 工作时间 ● 报酬 |
2. 信件的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
3. 词数：100左右。
假如你是李华，曾经在美国留学三年，今年回国。你在Tutor.com网站上看到一则广告——现住北京的美国Smith夫妇想给他们的两个孩子找一个汉语家教。你很感兴趣，随即向Smith夫妇写一封正式英文书信。信的内容包括以下要点：
|
Location |
北京 |
|
Name |
李华 |
|
|
lh137@hotmail.com |
|
Strengths |
● 母语是中文，可以说流利的英语 ● 有家教的经验 ● 热心、开朗、有耐心…… |
|
Questions |
● 工作时间 ● 报酬 |
注意：1. 文章应包括表格里的所有信息，可适当发挥。
2. 信件的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
3. 词数：120左右。
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Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith, |
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I am writing to apply for the job as a tutor, which I saw advertised on the Tutor.com last |
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week. I would be interested in teaching the children Chinese. |
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Looking forward to your reply. |
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Yours sincerely, |
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Li Hua |