题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,计划暑假期间到英国University of Nottingham学习英语,为期三个月,学习期间想找一份兼职工作。请给英国的朋友Anna写信求助,要点如下:
1. 你的学习安排;2. 做兼职的原因;3. 可胜任的工作(餐厅服务员、儿童汉语教师……)。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Anna,
How are you doing?
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Anna,
How are you doing? I’m planning to go to the UK to take a three-month English course at the University of Nottingham after graduation in June. It’s quite expensive but I’m hoping to improve my pronunciation.
To help cover the costs of my study, I aim to find a part-time job. It’s also a good way to practice my oral English and develop a better understanding of the British society. So I’m wondering if you could ask around your friends to see if anyone wants a waiter in the restaurant or a Chinese teacher for their children. I would appreciate it very much if you can help me.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】本文属于提纲类作文,要求假定你是李华,计划暑假期间到英国University of Nottingham学习英语,为期三个月,学习期间想找一份兼职工作。请给英国的朋友Anna写信求助。要注意写信的格式和特殊用词。考虑用一般现在时来写。要点:1. 你的学习安排;2. 做兼职的原因;3. 可胜任的工作(餐厅服务员、儿童汉语教师……)。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如: plan to计划,I would appreciate it very much if如果……我将不胜感激。