Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Yesterday morning, I was surprising to hear that my best friend Allee has been hit by a car and was in hospital. The other day when he was going to cross a street, he was such careful that he didn’t go until he saw the traffic light to turn green. But hardly had he got to the middle of the street while he saw a car suddenly appear on his right-hand side and come towards them. It was too late for Allee to escape. He was hit by the car or was thrown a few meters away. He was sent to the nearest hospital immediately and had operation. When I went to see him, he was out of dangers but still looked pale. I sincere hope he will recover and return to normal as soon as possible.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】surprising 改成surprised

【2】has 改成had

【3】such改成so

【4】to turn green的to去掉

【5】while改成when

【6】them改成him

【7】or改成and

【8】had和operation中间加an

【9】dangers改成danger

【10】sincere改成sincerely

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于记叙文，叙述了我的朋友Allee被汽车撞倒的详细情况。

【1】surprising 改成surprised 考查形容词。形容词surprising令人惊讶的，通常修饰事物；surprised感到惊讶的，通常修饰人或与人有关的事物。本句主语是I，所以使用形容词surprised。

【2】has 改成had 考查时态。本句的主语是was，可知Allen被撞是在我听说之前就已经发生的事情，所以使用过去完成时had been hit。

【3】such改成so 考查固定句式。so的后面通常要接形容词或副词，构成“so+形容词/副词+that....”。而such的后面通常要接名词或名词短语，构成“such+名词/名词短语+that....”。所以本句中形容词careful的前面要加so。

【4】to turn green的to去掉 考查固定结构。固定结构see sb/sth do sth看见sb/sth做了某事，do前面省略了不定式符号to；本句中的see the traffic light turn green看见交通灯变绿。

【5】while改成when 考查固定句式。句式hardly...when...一...就....；句意：他一到路中央就看见一辆汽车突然出现并朝他冲了过来。

【6】them改成him 考查代词。本文叙述的是Allee被撞的事情，所以使用代词him指代Allee，因为代词them指代复数名词。

【7】or改成and 考查连词。句意：他被汽车撞了并扔掉几米之外。上下文之间是并列关系，所以使用连词and，而不是or。

【8】had和operation中间加an 考查定冠词。本句中名词operation手术是一个可数名词，不定冠词an表示泛指，短语have an operation做手术。

【9】dangers改成danger 考查固定搭配。短语out of danger摆脱危险；句意：当我去看他的时候，他已经脱离了危险，但是看起来仍然脸色苍白。

【10】sincere改成sincerely 考查副词。本句中副词sincerely作为状语修饰谓语动词hope，我真诚地希望....；英语中的形容词通常作为定语或者表语，不能做状语修饰动词。