题目内容
16.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dear Jim,
I'm writing to tell you my excited plan for the summer holiday.I intended to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp.I wonder you'd like to go with I.
This camp will open on July 20th in the suburb of Beijing.It offers teenagers like you and me the chance to enjoy sports and learning about Chinese culure.If you are interested in it,please let me know or I'll send you more informations.
I'm looking forward to meet you at the training camp in this summer.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本文主要讲述李华邀请英国朋友Jim参加龙舟训练营.营地于七月20号在北京郊区举办,并提供参加运动和了解中国文化的机会.
解答 Dear Jim,
I'm writing to tell you my excited plan for the summer holiday.I intended to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp.I wonder∧you'd like to go with I.
This camp will open on July 20th in the suburb of Beijing.It offers teenagers like you and me the chance to enjoy sports and learning about Chinese culure.If you are interested in it,please let me know or I'll send you more informations.
I'm looking forward to meet you at the training camp in this summer.
详解:
1.excited改为exciting 考查现在分词.现在分词转换的形容词常常修饰事物.
2.intended改为intend 考查动词时态.此处讲述的是一般事实,用一般现在时态.
3.加if/whether 考查连词.根据句意:我想知道你是否和我一起去.用连词if/whether.
4.I改为me 考查代词.with是介词,后接代词时用宾格代词.
5.the改为a 考查冠词.chance是可数名词,单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指.
6.learning改为learn 考查动词不定式.and是并列连词,它前后连接两个相同的语法成分,enjoyt和learn都是动词不定式,learn前省略了不定式符号to.
7.or改为and 考查连词.前后两个分句之间是并列关系而非选择关系,用连词and.
8.informations改为information 考查名词.information是不可数名词,没有复数形式.
9.meet改为meeting 考查动名词.to是介词,后接动词时用动名词形式.
10.去掉in 考查介词.this summer作时间状语时前面不加冠词the.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
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