Question

13．随着经济与社会的发展，私家车以及各类车辆的数量急剧增加，堵车，新手司机多，行人以及非机动车无视交通规则等情况导致司机的路怒症时有发生．
请你写一篇100字左右的文章，简要分析怒路症产生的原因以及如何预防以及应对路怒症．（路怒症Road rage）
As the development of society and economy，the number of the various vehicles is increasing sharply nowdays．However the condition of the roads has not been changed，So we can ofenmeet traffic jam on the road．At the meanwhile many new drivers are on the road，which makes the situation more worse．All of these result in Roadrage．（分析路怒症产生的原因）
To prevent Roadrage，we should severely publish thedrivers who don't follow the traffic rules．What's more，call on the drivers and pedestrian should keep calm when there is a traffic jam．After all Roadrage can only does no good to everyone．（如何预防以及应对路怒症）．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇关于路怒症的作文．根据要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一分析怒路症产生的原因；二如何预防以及应对路怒症．
高分句型：
1．At the meanwhile，many new drivers are on the road，which makes the situation more worse．句子里At the meanwhile表示"同时"；which 引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句more new drivers are on the road．
同时，许多新手上路，这让情况更加糟糕．
2．To prevent Road rage，we should severely publish the drivers who don't follow the traffic rules．句子里To prevent Road rage是动词不定式做目的状语； who引导定语从句 don't follow the traffic rules，代指先行词the driver．
为了预防路怒症，我们应该严厉的惩罚那些不遵守交通规则的司机．

解答 As the development of society and economy，the number of the various vehicles is increasing sharply nowdays．However the condition of the roads has not been changed，So we can ofen meet traffic jam on the road．At the meanwhile，many new drivers are on the road，which makes the situation more worse．【高分句型一】All of these result in Road rage．（分析路怒症产生的原因）
       To prevent Road rage，we should severely publish the drivers who don't follow the traffic rules．【高分句型二】What's more，call on the drivers and pedestrian to keep calm when there is a traffic jam．After all Road rage can only does no good to everyone．（如何预防以及应对路怒症）

点评 考查提纲类作文．
书面表达是一个高度综合性的题目，旨在考查考生的英语基础，发扬个性、关注环境的设题理念仍将是未来几年高考书面表 达的基本思路． 试题设置均为半开放式，给考生一定提 示的同时，也给考生提供了更为宽广的思维 空间，使考生留有很大的自由发挥的余地，这样更能全面和客观地考查考生的语言组织 和书面表达的能力．要写出一篇好的文章，考生不仅要精炼地表达所给信息，更加重要 的是在自由发挥部分，要有自己独到的见解．