题目内容
19.肥胖已经成为危害人们健康的严重问题,中小学生的肥胖趋势更为明显.你们班对此展开讨论.根据不同的观点,写一篇100词左右的短文.1.肥胖危害健康,应该节食,锻炼,预防肥胖.已经超重的,应该采取措施减肥.
2.中小学生生长身体的时候,减肥会影响身体发育,也会影响学习,因此应该顺其自然.
词汇:肥胖:fatness
Fatness is one of the serious problems which have a bad effect on our health. .
分析 本文属于提纲作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
亮点句型一:Fatness is one of the serious problems which have a bad effect on our health.肥胖是严重影响我们健康的严重问题之一.这是一个定语从句,先行词是problems,在定语从句which have a bad effect on our health中做主语.
亮点句型二:Some students think fatness does harm to our health,so it is necessary to be on a diet and take suitable exercise to prevent it.一些学生认为肥胖对我们的健康有害,因此有必要节食并采取适当的运动来预防肥胖.本句so引导的是结果状语从句,在从句中it是形式主语,动词不定式是真正的主语.
解答 Fatness is one of the serious problems which have a bad effect on our health.(亮点句型一)And at present the situation in the teenagers is even worse,As to this,a discussion was carried out in our class.
Some students think fatness does harm to our health,so it is necessary to be on a diet and take suitable exercise to prevent it.(亮点句型二)Those who are overweight should take measures to lose weight to be healthy.
But others have a different opinion.They say losing weight will be bad for the teenagers during their growth course,as well as their studies.So there is no doubt to leave it as it is.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.