Question

1．假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在其下面写上该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写上修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
editor，
Although I'm 16 years old，my father still treats me as a careless children．He doesn't value my opinion's．He is very strict to me and often punish me for leaving things lie around in the house while he does this all time．I think he fails to set an example to me to follow it．But he often says："Do as I say，not as I do．"Even bad，he points out my past mistakes to guests，making myself feel hurt．I love my father，but I can't bear that he does．I had tried many times to talk with him but he never listens．Please，help me．
Puzzled．

Answer 1

分析 作者在本文中向编辑讲述了自己的苦恼，作者认为爸爸仍旧把他当成小孩子，不尊重他的观点，并且不能给他做出好的榜样，还在客人面前指出他曾经犯过的错误，这让他不能忍受，为此，作者深感苦恼，希望能得到编辑的帮助．

解答 editor，
Although I'm 16 years old，my father still treats me as a careless children．He doesn't value
                                                                                                  child
my opinion's．He is very strict to me and often punish me for leaving things lie around in the
                                            with                  punishes                              lying
house while he does this all∧time．I think he fails to set an example to me to follow it．But he
                                       the                                                                             去掉it
often says："Do as I say，not as I do．"Even bad，he points out my past mistakes to guests，
                                                                 worse
making myself feel hurt．I love my father，but I can't bear that he does．I had tried many times
              me                                                                     what                have
to talk with him but he never listens．Please，help me．
Puzzled．
1．children改为child；考查名词，child是可数名词，前面有不定冠词a表示一个，故用单数形式．
2．to改为with；考查介词，be strict with 是固定短语，意为"对…严格要求"，故to改为with．
3．punish改为punishes；考查动词的时态，本文用的是一般现在时，这一句子的主语是he，所以动词punish要用第三人称单数形式．
4．lie改为lying；考查分词作状语，这里things和动词lie是主动关系，故用现在分词形式 lying 作状语．
5．all后面加 the；考查固定短语，all time意为"全部时间"，all the time意为"总是，一直"，结合语境分析句意应为"他不允许我在房间里乱扔东西，而他却总是这样做"，所以all后面要加the，表示"总是，一直"．
6．去掉follow后面的it；考查句式结构，set an example to sb to follow意为"为某人树立一个榜样"，其中的an example作动词follow的宾语，所以段文中follow后面的it重复，故去掉it．
7．bad改为worse；考查形容词的比较级；even此处意为"甚至，更加"，后面跟形容词的比较级形式．
8．myself改为me；考查人称代词，分析句子结构，此处应该用me作make的宾语，意为"使我感觉受到伤害"．
9．that改为what；考查代词，结合语境分析，句意应为"我不能忍受他所做的"，可知此处要用疑问代词what引导宾语从句，what在从句中作动词does的宾语．
10．had改为have；考查动词的时态，本文通篇用的是一般现在时态，根据句意，此处应该用现在完成时，故had改为have．

点评 整体理解短文，充分运用所学的基础知识，包括一些实词和虚词的用法，固定短语搭配，习惯性用法，结合上下文整体关系，找出错误并加以修正．