Question

7．古语有云：父母在，不远游．你认为这种行孝理念现在过时了吗？请说明理由．
要求：120词左右．
参考词汇：流动性 mobility 福利welfare．

Answer 1

分析 本文主题为：孝顺
写作要点为：1，发表观点；2，提供依据；3，总结．

解答 In my opinion，we shall not leave our parents alone for one cause or another．As internationalization and increased mobility of society require the young to be always on the way of seeking educational or occupational success，the majority of the young men have little time to visit their parents and take care of them while most seniors are willing to live with their children．
As is well-known，though our country's economy rises rapidly，social welfare system for the senior is still under construction．Therefore，it's not proper for the young to take the Western approach of a welfare society where the government lakes care of all the elderly．
In conclusion，even if the social welfare's system can support all senior citizens，the love that only a family member can give cannot be replaced．

点评 考生需根据所提供的信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．