Question

【题目】假如你是李华，半个月前你给澳大利亚好友Jack邮寄了一些口罩以帮助他和家人防范新冠肺 炎。请给他写一封电子邮件询问他是否收到口罩并告知他一些防范经验，内容包括：

1 .表达关心；

2．询问口罩是否收到；

3.介绍防范经验。

注意：1.词数：100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：新冠肺炎COVID - 19 口罩surgical mask

Dear Jack,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dec Jack,

At COVID - 15 it still spreading and threatening the world, I'm concerned about you and your family. I mailed some surgical masks to you days ago, and now I'm writing to ask whether you have received them.

As is known, my country has effectively had COVID -19 under control, so I want to share some experience of fighting against the virus with you. Firstly, try to stay at home, measure your body temperature regularly and wash your hands often. Besides, wear a mask when you go out and don't gather with others. Most importantly, go to see the doctor immediately if you feel uncomfortable.

I hope my suggestions will be of help to you. Best wishes!

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇属于应用文，要求考生写电子邮件询问好友情况，并给出防范疫情的建议。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为现在完成时和一般现在时

结构：总分总

邮件类的结构首段表示问候，分段给出建议，尾段表示祝愿。

要求：1. 问候好友近况。

2.具体阐述给好友的建议

1) 建议1 (example 1)

2) 建议2 (example 2)

3) 建议3 (conclusion)

3. 表达对好友的祝愿。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

threaten; be concerned about; surgical masks; under control; measure body temperature; gather with

第三步：连词成句

1. At COVID - 15 it still spreading and threatening the world, I'm concerned about you and your family.

2. I mailed some surgical masks to you days ago,

3. my country has effectively had COVID -19 under control,

4. measure your body temperature regularly and wash your hands often.

5. wear a mask when you go out and don't gather with others.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改