题目内容
11．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
In recent years，more and more college student in our city have been taking advantage of their summer vacation to do volunteer work in foreign countries．As student reporter，I interviewed one of them，whom shared her experience．
Chen Ying，a second-year English major，went to Egypt on its own as a volunteer worker in lately July．She taught English to children or became involved in activities relating to protecting women's rights．She found many local girls were not able to recognize their own value and got unfair treat．She joined in partners from all over the world on campus lecture tours around Egypt．In her spare time，she visits the pyramids with other volunteers．
分析 本文主要讲述越来越多的大学生利用暑假在外国做志愿者活动．Chen Ying作为志愿者去埃及教孩子们英语，参加保护妇女权力的活动．在空余时间里，她和志愿者参观金字塔．
解答 In recent years，more and more college student in our city have been taking advantage of their summer vacation to do volunteer work in foreign countries．As∧student reporter，I interviewed one of them，whom shared her experience．
Chen Ying，a second-year English major，went to Egypt on its own as a volunteer worker in lately July．She taught English to children or became involved in activities relating to protecting women's rights．She found many local girls were not able to recognize their own value and got unfair treat．She joined in partners from all over the world on campus lecture tours around Egypt．In her spare time，she visits the pyramids with other volunteers．
详解：
1．student改为students student是可数名词，前面有more and more修饰进用复数形式．
2．As 后加a 考查冠词．reporter是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指．
3．whom改为who 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词one在从句中作主语，用关系代词who．
4．its改为her 考查代词．根据上下文语境可知，Chen Ying是女性，用代词her．
5．lately改为late 考查形容词．July是名词，其前用形容词修饰．
6．or改为and 考查连词． taught和became是并列谓语，用连词and连词．
7．relating改为related 考查过去分词．be related to意为"与…有关"，是固定搭配，此处过去分词短语related to protecting women's rights作后置定语．
8．treat改为treatment 考查名词．get是及物动词，后接名词作宾语．
9．去掉in 考查词语用法．join是及物动词，后接名词作宾语，不需要介词．
10．visits改为visited 考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．
