Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear editor,

       Some years ago, my hometown was used to be a beautiful place．Thick trees and grass can be seen all over the hills．As time going by, people destroyed almost the whole forest grow more crops．To make matters worse, people let their cattles eat up the grass．So you can only see wasteland instead green forests now．As a result of, when it rains, the soil is washed down the hills and into the rivers．Strongly winds also blow away the valuable soil lie on the top of the fields．

       I do hope all the people will take good care of the forests but plant more trees to improve our living conditions．

Answer 1

1．去掉was                2．can 改为could               3．As 改为With，或者going 改为went

4．grow前加to           5．cattles改为cattle            6．instead后加of                7．去掉of

8．Strongly改为Strong              9．lie改为lying            10．but改为and