Question

书面表达

你班就“如何防止交通事故的发生”进行调查。请根据此表内容写一短文向政府、驾驶员提出建议；并根据你的经验给行人提出两条以上的合理建议。

注意：1．词数120词左右

2．标题、开头和结尾已经写好，不算在总词数之内

How to Avoid Traffic Accidents

　　We conducted a survey on how to prevent road accidents．Here are some suggestions．

　　As for the government,_________________________________

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　　It is up to all of us to try our best to avoid traffic accidents．The more we work together, the less the accidents will be caused．

Answer 1

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How to Avoid Traffic Accidents 　　We conducted a survey on how to prevent road accidents．Here are some suggestions． 　　As for the government, it needs to improve the bus system so that it will be more convenient and efficient for the passengers to take buses．In order to relieve the crowded traffic, the government should speed up building underground system．At the same time, private cars should be limited, which reduce the heavy traffic．Besides, the drivers should also do something to prevent road accidents．When driving, they must concentrate their attention on driving and never speak on mobile phones．Do not drive too fast through city streets．If you have consumed alcoholic drinks, stop driving．To pedestrians, they should always cross the road on a crossing, remember to look both ways and listen for cars that might not be able to see, and obey traffic lights．(125W) 　　It is up to all of us to try our best to avoid traffic accidents．The more we work together, the less the accidents will be caused． 　　书面表达评分标准： 　　1、本题总分15分，按5个档次给分。 　　2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量。确定或调整档次，最后给分。 　　3、词数少于80或多于120从总分中减去1分。 　　4、评分时，应该注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。连贯性1分 　　5、拼写和标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇均可接受。 　　6、如果书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 　　内容要点： 　　1、完善公共汽车系统，使乘客乘车更加便捷 　　2、加快建设地铁系统，缓解地面交通拥挤 　　3、限制私人小汽车，减少车流量 　　4、注意力集中，开车时不打手机 　　5、不开快车 　　6、不酒后开车 　　以上各要点每个1.5分，自由发挥的两个要点各2分。