Question

【题目】假如你是新华中学学生李华，在最近举行的市高中生英语口语大赛中获得了一等奖。某英语报社邀请你写一篇稿件，介绍你练习英语口语的经验。稿件内容如下：

1.树立自信，克服羞愧心理；

2.多参加英语角活动；

3.多看英语新闻（如CCTV-9）

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School.______________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】I'm Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School. Now I'd like to share my experience in practicing oral English.

Firstly, I'm always confident and brave. I seize every opportunity to speak, not afraid of making mistakes which may embarrass me. I also find it of great benefit to take part in English corners, where I make many friends. By talking with them, my oral English has improved a lot. Finally, some English programs like CCTV-9 contribute to the progress in my speaking ability. Through this channel, not only did I keep informed of the current events going on both at home and abroad, but I also learn the standard pronunciation and intonation by repeated imitation.

Practice makes perfect, as the saying goes. Our hard work will finally be rewarded if we can stick to it.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：写作是一个人英语综合水平的体现。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。本文是某英语报社邀请你写一篇稿件，介绍你练习英语口语的经验。题目给出了三点经验，写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】

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