Question

【题目】高中生活是人一生中最美好的时光，除了学业之外，我们还经历、感悟了许多。为了在毕业前不留下遗憾，我们搞好备考复习的同时，是不是还该做点什么？请根据提示的要点写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的想法。

①向老师表示感谢 ②跟对你有误解的同学谈一谈

③征求同学的宝贵意见 ④再为班级做件有意义的事

注意：1．可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯；

2．短文的单词数：120左右（开头已给出的单词不计入单词总数）

High school is regarded as the best time of my life. Besides classes and homework,

Answer 1

【答案】

High school is regarded as the best time of my life. Besides classes and homework, there’s something more that I especially treasure.

In order to leave school with no regrets, I’ll make the best of my limited time to go over the lessons I’ve learned. At the same time, I’d like to show my gratitude to all the teachers who have given me so much help in the past three years.

In addition, it’s necessary for me to have a talk with whoever might have misunderstood me, for I do care about the friendship between us. For the purpose of improving myself, I’ll ask my classmates for some advice which may be of great value to me. Last but not least, doing another good deed for my class is also my plan.

With these things done, I will have no regrets in my high school life.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇要求写一篇小短文，根据提示信息来写。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，而且使用了多种句式和结构。文章第一段中的“High school is regarded as the best time of my life”中使用了be regarded as这个短语，意思是被认为…，句意：高中被认为是人生中最美好的时候。第二段中的“In order to leave school with no regrets”中使用了in order to这个短语，意思是为了……，句意：为了离开学校不留遗憾。“I’d like to show my gratitude to all the teachers who have given me so much help in the past three years.”这句话使用了定语从句，句意：我要感谢所有那些在过去的三年里给了我很大帮助的老师们。“it’s necessary for me to have a talk with whoever might have misunderstood me,”中使用了it’s necessary for sb. to do sth.固定句型，句意：我有必要跟那些误解我的人谈一谈。本文还使用了大量短语，make the best of 充分利用，show gratitude to对…表示感谢，In addition另外，For the purpose of为了…的目的。

Last but not leas，In addition，At the same time,这些插入语的用使文章条理更清晰，更紧凑。