题目内容
假如你是李华,你昨天收到好友晓东的来信,他说他上了高中以后感觉很郁闷,很孤独,学习压力大,作业完不成,上课听不懂等诸多学习和生活的问题,想辍学。请你帮帮他,给他提些建议。
注意:1. 字数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.可紧扣主题适当发挥。辍学; drop out of school
One possible version:
Dear xiao Dong
I am very sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your middle school life. However , the situation is very easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you :
First of all ,you should be friendly to anyone who you meet at the new school and try to make friends with them. And it is also a good idea to take part in after-school activities. That can make you happy. Secondly, Why not choose some proper ways to relax. In my opinion, taking exercise ,watching TV or playing computer games is a good way to relax yourself. Thirdly ,I agree that you should study hard and have a good preparation for every class so that you can understand the teacher.
I hope that you will find these tips useful
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本文为应用文建议信。要求根据信中提出的问题给好友晓东写一篇英语建议信,要点包括:引述问题; 分析问题;提出合理建议等三方面内容。写作时要注意:1.使用第一、二人称和一般现在时;2.建议要合理,可以适当发挥想象以丰富文章内容;3.要恰当使用连接词和插入语,以使文章内容连贯,有层次;4.尽量使用高级词汇和多种句式结构;5.注意100词左右。
【亮点说明】恰当使用连接词 However, First of all, Secondly, Thirdly 和表示建议的句型 Why not 等。
考点:考察应用文建议信的熟练运用。