题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,是Writing.Com的会员,近日收到如下邮件,邀请你尝试成为付费会员并上传作品。请结合邮件给予回复,解释你之前未上传作品的原因,并提出建议。
Hello, Li Hua! We noticed you’ve never tried a Writing.Com paid membership or upload any writing, so we’re offering you a discount to give it a go… A BIG discount: Take 50% off any paid membership of $19.95 or more. Visit our shop: http://Writing.Com/main/shop/cat/Memberships |
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have received your email which offers me a big discount. ___________________
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Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have received your email which offers me a big discount. I am writing to thank you for your kind offer. In the past years you have offered me a lot of help but I have never tried a Writing.Com paid membership, for which I feel really sorry. I never tried because I am not good at operating computers and don’t know how to pay to get your membership. I think the following suggestions may be of some help to you.
First, writings on your website need to be updated frequently for I find some articles are kind of old. Next, you should show your users how to be a membership clearly. Finally, I really hope for a bigger discount.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本次作文要求写一封回信。要点包括:解释你之前未上传作品的原因,并提出建议。故既要完成任务,又要兼顾形式的要求。
写作亮点:本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如:文章运用了定语从句which offers me a big discount.和for which I feel really sorry. 状语从句because I am not good at operating computers frequently, be of some help等词汇及First, Next, Finally等连接词。