题目内容
12.高中生活是人的一生中很美好的时光,除了学业之外,我们还经历、感悟了许多.为了不留遗憾,在临近毕业时,你将做些什么呢?请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文.•要抓紧时间温书迎考;
•要主动与对你有误解的同学沟通;
•要向老师父母感恩;
•其他你认为值得做的事情.
注意:
1.可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯;
2.短文词数:100词左右
3.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数
We all value the time we spent in high school.Besides studies,there seems to be a lot I really want to do before graduation.
分析 这是一篇提纲作文,高中生活是人的一生中很美好的时光,除了学业之外,我们还经历、感悟了许多.为了不留遗憾,在临近毕业时,我们将做些什么呢?让我们写一篇作文,这需要我们发挥英语思维,将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来.写作需要用第一人称,时态主要是一般将来时,内容要点包括:要抓紧时间温书迎考;要主动与对你有误解的同学沟通;要向老师父母感恩;其他你认为值得做的事情.我们此篇作文分为两部分,第一部分为高中生活是人的一生中很美好的时光.第二部分为为了不留遗憾,在临近毕业时,我们能做的事.
重点短语与句型:
make the best of 好好利用
make preparations for 准备
smooth away 清除
make progress取得进步
高分句型一:Above all,I'd like to express my gratitude to my teachers,with whose help I have made continuous progress in the past three years and my parents who have taken good care of me..此句用了两个定语从句
高分句型二:Finally,I would like to take some photo of my teachers,classmates and school,which will serve as reminders of my precious high school days.此句which引导非限制性定语从句
解答 We all value the time that we spent in high school.Besides studies,there seems to have a lot I really want to do before graduation(.高中生活是人的一生中很美好的时光)
Not wanting to leave some regret,I'll make the best of my time to go over the lessons and make adequate preparations for the College Entrance Exam.Meanwhile,I think that of necessity to have a heart-to-heart talk with whomever might have misunderstood me and smooth away the misunderstanding,for I do treasure our friendship.Above all,I'd like to express my gratitude to my teachers,with whose help I have made continuous progress in the past three years and my parents who have taken good care of me(高分句型一).Finally,I would like to take some photo of my teachers,classmates and school,which will serve as reminders of my precious high school days.(高分句型二)(为了不留遗憾,在临近毕业时,我们能做的事.)
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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