题目内容
【题目】请阅读下面内容，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
P= professor; S=students (In a philosophy class)
P: We all have this one life to live. A fleeting shadow amongst all that exists in this vast universe. We have the ability to accomplish anything, truly anything, if we use our time wisely.
P: (putting some golf balls into the jar) Is this jar full?
S: Yes.
P: (after add some pebbles into the jar) Is it full now?
S: Yes.
P: (after inserting some sand into the jar) How about now, is the jar full now?
S: Yes.
P: Good… (pouring some beer into the jar)
S: … (laughing, smiling, thinking, …)
P: Now I want you to recognize that this jar represents your life. The golf balls are the important things, your family, your friends, your health and your passions. The pebbles are the other important things, your car, your job, your home. The sand is everything else, the small stuff.
P: Now if you put the sand in the jar first you won’t have room for the pebbles or the golf balls. The same is true in life. If you spend all your energy and your time on the small stuff, you won’t have time for all the really important things that matter to you.
P: Pay attention to the things that are critical to your happiness. Take care of the golf balls first. The really important things. Set your priorities. Because everything else is just sand.
S: Professor, what does the beer represent?
P: I’m glad you asked. It goes to show that no matter how full your life may seem to be, there is always room for a couple of beers with a friend.
1. 用约30个词概括上述文中的内容；
2. 谈谈你对文中教授观点的看法，用适当理由或论据支撑你的看法。
3. 就文中所述哲理，谈谈在学习中该怎样践行教授的观点（或你的观点）。
（写作要求）
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
（评分标准）：内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
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【答案】A philosophy professor shares with his students the significance of a wise use of time. With a unique demonstration, he inspires them to prioritize the most important things over small stuff.
Personally, I do believe the professor reveals the true nature of life. We only have 24 hours a day, so it's unrealistic to include everything precious in our life. A wise sequence is therefore crucial to our wellbeing. Just as is shown in the demonstration, when life is stuffed with small things, big and meaningful ones will remain unfulfilled.
This principle can actually be followed in our study. For example, to efficiently acquire some knowledge, a global image of it should come first before we dive into small details Our study time should also be wisely allocated, addressing those important or difficult subject rather than small ones first. Never forget, being penny-wise but pound-foolish is never a good strategy in study.
【解析】
这是一篇议论文。谈谈对文中教授观点的看法，谈谈在学习中该怎样践行教授的观点。
第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1. 用约30个词概括上述文中的内容；
2. 谈谈你对文中教授观点的看法，用适当理由或论据支撑你的看法。
3. 就文中所述哲理，谈谈在学习中该怎样践行教授的观点（或你的观点）
第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段， 用约30个词概括上述文中的内容。第二段，谈谈你对文中教授观点的看法，用适当理由或论据支撑你的看法。第三段，就文中所述哲理，谈谈在学习中该怎样践行教授的观点（或你的观点）。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语:demonstration, prioritize, wellbeing, unfulfilled, share with，inspire them to do sth, reveals the true nature of life, be crucial to, be stuffed with, dive into.
第四步：确定较为高级的句子:before 引导的时间状语从句For example, to efficiently acquire some knowledge, a global image of it should come first before we dive into small details. 省略that的宾语从句Personally, I do believe the professor reveals the true nature of life.
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:Personally, For example, Finally.
第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
