题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你是校学生会主席, 高二年级在下个月举办英语周活动,请根据以下内容写一篇英语书面通知。
时间:12月7日-----11日 下午4:30----6:30
地点:学校体育馆
活动安排:1.周一开幕式 周五闭幕式
2.周二知识竞赛 周三英语演讲比赛 周四英文歌曲比赛
另外,每班准备一个英语短剧,在开幕式和闭幕式上表演,请各班务必认真组织,争取把这次英语周办的丰富多彩。
注意:1.字数:100字左右
2.应包括要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.通知格式已给出,但不计入总词数
提示词:体育馆 gymnasium
Notice
The English Week held every two years is approaching. _______________
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The Students’ Union
November 28.2015
【答案】
Notice
The English Week held every two years is approaching. All the students in Grade Two are required to take part in it at 4:30p.m every day ,and it will last 5 days,from December 7th. to 11th . The activities include the Opening ceremony on Monday and the Closing ceremony on Friday . Besides, we have Knowledge Contest, English songs and speech competition in the rest of the three days as well.
As for the details of the competition, ask your English teacher. Be sure that each class should give an English drama performance and make every effort to present us an interesting and colorful English week .
The Students’ Union
November 23,2015
【解析】试题分析:这是一篇材料作文。内容很明确,就是以学校学生会主席的名义,用英语写一份有关即将在本校举办高二英语周活动的书面通知,并且给出了时间、地点、活动安排、备注等相关的信息。在写作时文章的结构要清晰,不要漏掉信息点。写作时注意句子的完整性,主谓一致。同时选择合适的连接词来连接全文。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
【亮点解析】文章层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。文中使用了一些短语如 are required to ,take part in,in the rest of, As for, make every effort to等等意思表达准确完整。运用了祈使句As for the details of the competition, ask your English teacher。用到了宾语从句Be sure that each class should give an English drama performance and make every effort to present us an interesting and colorful English week .这些非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少。