题目内容
11.运动在人们的生活中起了很重要的作用.许多人热爱运动.请你根据以下信息写一篇文章,题为"Doing sport is good for us",谈谈运动的益处.注意:1.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.词数100左右.
Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy and energetic.People just want to relax themselves and have fun.People take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger.Some of people want to lose weight and be slim by doing sports…
Doing sport is goodfor us
分析 这是一篇关于运动的好处的作文.根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态.内容包括:一点明话题;二运动的益处;三运动的种类以及自己的爱好.
高分句型:
1.So People who take part in sports can become stronger 句子里 who引导定语从句 take part in sports 代指先行词People;take part in 表示"参加".
参加运动的人会变得更强壮.
2.Above all,sports are of great help to lose weight.句子里Above all 表示"最重要的是"; of great help 是固定结构,表示"有帮助的".
最重要的是,运动有助于减肥.
解答 Doing sport is goodfor us
As is known to all,sports are playing a more and more important role in people's life.(点明话题)That is because we can benefit a lot from sports.First of all,doing sports every day helps us keep healthy and energetic.So People who take part in sports can become stronger.【高分句型一】Secondly,People can relax themselves and have fun when doing sports.Above all,sports are of great help to lose weight.【高分句型二】Therefore,people will be slimer by doing sports.(运动的益处)
There are quite a few kinds of sports you can take up,such as jogging,running,balls game and so on.Jogging is my favorite,because I can not only keep fit but also make friends with the parteners.But whatever you like,sports are good for if you can keep doing regularly.(运动的种类以及自己的爱好)
点评 考查开发类作文.
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