题目内容
【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请给你的外教Mr. Black写一封邮件,邀请他参加你们学校举行的英语读书会(reading circle)活动,邮件的内容包括:
介绍读书活动的相关信息(例如:时间、地点、活动目的、内容等);
1.说明你发出邀请的原因;
2.询问对方的意向。
注意:1. 词数不少于100词;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Black,
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Your,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Black,
I hope that everything goes on well with you. I’m writing to invite you to join us in the English reading circle to be held in our school. We’ll feel honored if you are present.
The activity is scheduled at 8:00 am this Friday in the auditorium. Aiming to improve the students’ understanding of the beauty of foreign literature, the reading circle will allow students to communicate with each other face to face, sharing their own reading experience together.
As we consider that you can give us some professional introductions to English literature and some valuable suggestions on English reading, we sincerely hope that you can come to join us.
Would you be kind enough to spare some time for us? Thank you in advance. Hope to hear from you soon.
【解析】本篇书面表达属于提纲作文,内容是给外教Mr. Black写一封邮件,邀请他参加你们学校举行的英语读书会(reading circle)活动,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。4、注意邮件格式。
【亮点说明】本文层次分明,结构紧凑,语言连贯。同时使用了多种句式和结构。比如复合句Aiming to improve the students’ understanding of the beauty of foreign literature, the reading circle will allow students to communicate with each other face to face, sharing their own reading experience together. 宾语从句 As we consider that you can give us some professional introductions to English literature and some valuable suggestions on English reading, we sincerely hope that you can come to join us.等