Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你家楼下住着一位新搬来的英国人James, 他在你家信箱里留了一封信，抱怨你家维修厨房时产生的噪音。请给他写一封回信，内容主要包括：

1. 表达歉意；

2. 解释原因：父母白天上班，只能晚上维修(refit/do repairs)；不专业，耗时长；……

3. 说明措施：请工人周末白天维修。

注意： 1. 词数 80 左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

Dear James,

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear James,

We are very sorry for the noise to have spoiled your evenings and we do hope you accept our apologies.

As my parents are busy working during daytime, they have to refit our kitchen in the evenings. However, they aren’t so expert at doing house repairs that they have difficulty in getting things to fit properly. As a consequence, it’s taking longer than expected and has resulted in a lot of banging and hammering.

To make things better, we will ask a professional worker to do the unfinished work this weekend. We promise you won’t be disturbed in the evenings again.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。要求写一封信。

第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封信; 你家楼下住着一位新搬来的英国人James, 他在你家信箱里留了一封信，抱怨你家维修厨房时产生的噪音。请给他写一封回信，内容主要包括：1. 表达歉意；2. 解释原因：父母白天上班，只能晚上维修(refit/do repairs)；不专业，耗时长；……3. 说明措施：请工人周末白天维修。

第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组) , 如: have spoiled毁掉，apologies.歉意，have difficulty in有困难，As a consequence结果，be disturbed被打扰等。

第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【高分句型1】

They have trouble in refitting our kitchen because they are not expert. 这里运用了原因状语从句。

【高分句型2】

To solve the problem in time, we will send for a worker who is professional to do the work tomorrow. 运用了who引导的定语从句。