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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

With the time go by, Chris is now a senior three student that devotes himself in his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as a usual, he attended several classes. In the evening, he studied at home until deep into die night. He was too sleepy and tired that he couldn’t work effective. His father came up and advises him to have a break. Soon they came up with a good ideas. They bought a kite which they liked very much and then the family went to the suburbs Chris enjoyed himself fly the kite. The family had a picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air. On Monday，Chris was energetic and active in class.

Answer 1

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【解析】本文通过Chris的故事说明了这样一个道理，在日常的生活中，要劳逸结合。

考查固定用法。With the time going by随着时间的流逝，是固定用法，所以go改成going。

考查固定短语。随着时间的流逝，Chris现在是一名高三的学生，他每天致力于自己的功课。devote to致力于，是固定短语，所以in改成to。

考查固定短语。as usual像往常一样，是固定短语，所以去掉a。

考查固定句型。so…that太……以至于，是固定句型，所以too改成so。

考查副词。修饰动词work，用副词，所以effective改成effectively。

考查时态。表示发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时，所以advises改成advised。

考查名词单复数。很快，他们想出一个好主意。表示“一个好主意”，所以用名词单数，ideas改成 idea。

考查定语从句。Where Chris enjoyed himself flying the kite.作定语，修饰the suburbs，所以Where Chris enjoyed himself flying the kite. 是一个定语从句，关系词在从句中作地点状语，所以用关系副词Where，在Chris前加where。

考查固定用法。enjoy doing喜欢做某事，是固定用法，所以fly改成flying。

考查连词。这家人在一起野餐，并且感觉在户外非常放松。表示并列关系，所以but改成and。