Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的班长李华，你们班的外教Lisa已经结束本学期的教学工作回到美国，请代表你们班给她写一封邮件。邮件的内容包括：

1. 询问她的近况；

2. 回顾在外教课上的收获；

3. 表达对她的感谢和祝福。

注意：1. 词数不少于50；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Lisa,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Lisa,

How have you been? You must be enjoying your life back at home. We still miss the days we spent together.

In the last term, we all benefited a lot from your lessons. We improved our oral English and became more confident to express ourselves. In addition, we learned so much about western culture and tradition.

On behalf of my class, I would like to thank you for teaching us English! We wish you joy and happiness in the new stage of life!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出，写作时可适当添加细节以使行文连贯，注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅；注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇电子邮件。格式正确，内容齐全，层次分明，使用高级句子。You must be enjoying your life back at home.含情态动词的进行时态；We still miss the days we spent together.省略引导词的定语从句用在句中；另外，In the last term, In addition, On behalf of my class,的运用为文章增色添彩。