题目内容
【题目】假设你是某中学新老师李红,请你给你的朋友王刚写一封信,告诉他你第一天上课的情况,主要内容如下:
⑴.描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事情;⑵介绍你处理该事的方式;⑶谈谈你的感想。
注意:⑴词数100字左右。⑵可适当增加细节使行文连贯。⑶文中不得出现与本人及学校相关的任何真实信息。
【答案】
Dear Wang Gang,
Long time no see ! I miss you very much! Now I am so excited that I can’t wait to share with you an unforgettable experience. I gave my first lesson today, which left me a deep impression.
Seeing a young teacher enter the classroom, my students began to make more noise. I stood on the platform, feeling embarrassed and not knowing what to do. Then I realized something must be done. I asked the kids whether they liked English songs. After taking a deep breath, I sang a song I had practised many times. To my surprise, all the kids were concentrating on my class later on.
How delighted I am now! Actually, whatever happens, we must stay calm first and then find a wise solution. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely
Li Hong
【解析】试题分析:这是一篇书信写作。主要是向朋友讲述上班的事情,⑴.描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事情;⑵介绍你处理该事的方式;⑶谈谈你的感想。题目已经给定大致内容,写作时要注意适当增加内容,以保证文章的连贯性。注意文中所给的信息,不可遗漏,可以多进行一些补充,尽量保持卷面整洁,字体美观,注意行文的连贯性。时态:用一般现在时。书信的格式一定要正确。使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次。
【亮点说明】首先,书信的格式要正确。第一段简明扼要的表达了对朋友的思念之情及写信的目的,并使用了which引导的定语从句。第二段主要记叙了自己难忘的事。使用了主语后置,以及从句的写作技巧。第三段用了感叹句How delighted I am now! 以及表达期盼回信之情。整篇文章语言言简意赅,感情真挚,所有要点都没有遗漏。文章连贯通顺。