Question

假如你是某高中学生李光，进入高中后，你觉得学英语的方式 和初中有很大不同，你给自己的英语王老师写了一封信，讲述自己的英语学习情况。要包括以下内容：
1.开始学习高中英语时，觉得英语比初中英语难很多，几乎丧失信心。
2． 在英语老师的帮助下慢慢的认识到英语的重要性。
3．每天努力学习英语，提高自己的听，说，读，写技能
4．向老师和同学请教更好的英语学习方法。
5．现在英语取得了很大进步，对英语越来越感兴趣。(信的开头已写好)
提示： 初中  ：  junior high school  高中：   senior high school丧失信心：lose heart取得巨大的进步：make great progress
Dear Mr.Wang
I’m glad to tell your that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high school student.
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I’m glad to tell your that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high school student.
When I started senior English in the beginning, I found it much more difficult than what we learned in junior school and I almost lose heart. Later, I realized the importance of English, so I got up early every morning, recited English words, listened to English tapes and did a lot of exercises. I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways of learning English.
Now, I’m improving my English greatly. And I’m getting more and more interested in learning it. Thank you so much for your great help in your class.
Wish you all the best.  
Yours,
Li guang

解析试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
考点：提纲类作文
点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。