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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It had been raining for three days before I called my parents last week to ensuring that they were OK. I was worrying by the violent storms because our home is located at foot of a mountain. And I still remembered how our house was flooded terrible when I was little. My parents had to get water out of our house with washbasins, with my sister anti me staying safely on the bed and watched. Luckily, my parents said something bad had happened during the storms. Therefore, one day later, I was told by my elder sister that the walls around our yard had fallen down two days ago. Then I realized my parents just didn’t want to worry about me because they didn’t want to distract me from my studies.

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【解析】1.句意：为了确保他们没事。此处是动词不定式做目的状语，故把ensuring--- ensure。

2.句意：我感到担忧。故把worrying---worried。

3.固定词组：at the foot of在---脚下，故在foot前加the。

4.句意：我还记得我小时候房子被水淹没的情景。是现在记得过去的事，所以“记得”用一般现在时态，故把remembered--- remember。

5.副词修饰动词，故把terrible--- terribly。

6.句意：我妹妹背靠着我安全地呆在床上观看。此处是with的独立主格结构，表示主动关系，staying and watching是并列关系，故把watched--- watching。

7.句意：很幸运，我的父母说没什么不好的事发生。根据句意可知把something---nothing。

8.句意：一天后，我的姐姐告诉我我们家的院墙一天前倒了。可知，与上句是一种转折关系，故把Therefore---However。

9.句意：两天前。故把before---ago。

10.句意：我意识到我的父母不想让我担忧。worry sb.使某人担忧，故把about去掉。