Question

【题目】假如你是李华，请你给在外地读书，正在生病的朋友王鹏写一封说服性信函，说明锻炼的重要性和好处，鼓励他积极锻炼身体，从而为更好地学习打下基础。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Wang Peng,

I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now._______________________________________________________________

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_________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes

Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Wang Peng,

I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now. You have been so absorbed in study that you have had no time for exercise. But it is really harmful to your health. I feel it would be more beneficial to your health if you could take more exercise in future.

In fact, exercise can contribute to your health and fresh your mind. After one or two hours of exercise you can study better. Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without feeling bad or ill. Otherwise, your study will be interrupted from time to time by sickness.

In a word, exercise is as useful and important as your study. So I put forward a suggestion that you take at least one hour’s exercise every day from now on.

I would be more than happy to see you have a stronger body.

Best wishes

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假如你是李华，请你给在外地读书，正在生病的朋友王鹏写一封说服性信函，说明锻炼的重要性和好处，鼓励他积极锻炼身体，从而为更好地学习打下基础。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

注意：1. 词数100左右；2．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。So……that 句型的使用：You have been so absorbed in study that you have had no time for exercise.条件状语从句的使用：I feel it would be more beneficial to your health if you could take more exercise in future.倒装句的使用勘称完美：Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without feeling bad or ill.连接词的使用也使文章增色不少：But；In fact, Otherwise, In a word。