题目内容
假如你是李华, Jane 是美国人。在她暑假来中国游玩时你们相识,并成为好朋友。Jane回国后,你很想念她,于是给她写了一封信,并且和她谈了你对高一新生活的感受。信头信尾均已给出;词数150左右。
Dear Jane,
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Dear Jane,
How’s everything going? I’m so glad to have met you and become friends with you. I miss you very much after you left China and thus I am writing to tell you something about me. I entered senior high school in September. Our school is very large and beautiful and I feel the new school life is very exciting and full of challenges. My teachers and classmates are all very kind. Now, I can get along well with my new classmates, with whose help I adjust to the new life quickly. I have decided to try my best to learn a lot from them and devote myself to my study. I believe I can make great progress in the new semester. Of course, I will also do more exercise to keep fit.
Give my best regards to your parents and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Your sincerely,
LiHua
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇书信写作,首先要注意格式规范和正确。开头要有称呼,结尾要落款。书信的内容主要是表达对于Jane的思念和表达自己高一新生活的感受,因此感情要真切,对于新生活的描述内容要具体。尽量保持卷面整洁,字体美观,注意书信感情流露的把握以及内容的连贯性。时态:用一般现在时。使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次。
【亮点说明】I can get along well with my new classmates, with whose help I adjust to the new life quickly.使用非限制性定语从句,准确表达了跟同学相处融洽。be so glad to…, get along well with,adjust to …,try one’s best to…,devote oneself to…,make great progress in…,look forward to…keep fit等词语和句型的使用,是文章的表达更加生动,内容更加具体。Thus,Now,Of course等副词和介词短语在句中或句首的运用,使得文章更加连贯,转承自然。I miss,I entered,I feel,I adjust to,I have decided to,I believe I can等动词的使用,准确地描述了自己现在的生活和境况,向朋友传达了我的相关信息。开头How’s everything going?,以及结尾部分Give my best regards to your parents and I look forward to hearing from you soon.使用书信常用表达方式,表达对朋友的问候和传达祝福。