Question

【题目】现在很多家长都会强迫孩子从小至少学一门“兴趣课”，比如：音乐、美术等，声称是为了孩子的将来好。请根据以下要点，谈谈你对这种现象的看法：

1. 小孩学习“兴趣课”的现状；

2. 你对这一现象的看法：合理或不合理；

3. 简述你觉得合理或不合理的原因。

注意：1. 词数80-100；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】

Interest Classes May Kill Interests

It is common nowadays for parents to send their children into so-called “interest classes.” Although children can learn useful things there, I don’t think it is wise to force them to attend such classes, because it may be a waste of time and money—the uninterested children may play in class, or even run away. Even if the children have some interest in the subjects at first, their interest may fade away when they have a schedule that is too full to complete, so I advise parents not to make their children too busy with their studies.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类写作，要点已给出，写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】It is common nowadays for parents to send their children into so-called “interest classes.” 运用固定句式；Although children can learn useful things there , I don’t think it is wise to force them to attend such classes, because it may be a waste of time and money-the uninterested children may play in class, or even run away.运用让步状语从句；Even if the children have some interest in the subjects at first, their interest may fade away when they have a schedule that is too full to complete, so I advise parents not to make their children too busy with their studies.此句式为文章增色，显得文章很有档次。