Question

19．手机本来是方便联系的，但是很多年轻人却将手机当成消磨时间的娱乐工具．他们整天低头发微信、玩游戏，被人们戏称为"低头族"．请为学校专刊写一篇投稿，对这种情况进行分析，并发表你的看法，文章中需包括下面的要点：
1．人们对手机产生依赖，疏远家人和亲友；
2．低头玩手机甚至引发交通事故，给家人带来痛苦．
注意：1．词数100左右；
      2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．参考词汇：低头族Smartphone Addicts．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
They are called Smartphone Addicts，who are buried in ②using their smartphones or laptops without raising their heads①．
他们被称为"低头族"，整天沉浸于低头玩他们的智能手机或笔记本电脑．
①本句为who引导的非限定性的定语从句，先行词Smartphone Addicts在从句中作主语．
②be buried in doing sth．意为：专心于，沉浸于做某事．
句型二：
As a matter of fact①，they can take up reading②to kill the time during their trips．
事实上，在他们的旅程中，他们可以开始通过阅读来消磨时间．
①As a matter of fact：用以加强语气，意思是：事实上，实际上，其实．
②take up doing sth．意为：开始做某事，开始从事某事．

解答 It is a common sight to see many young people engaged in emailing，twittering or chatting using their smartphones．It might be the best choice to kill time when they are on dull journey．（陈述了年轻人将手机当成消磨时间的娱乐工具的这一现象．）
They are called Smartphone Addicts，who are buried in using their smartphones or laptops without raising their heads．【高分句型一】This is very harmful．On one hand，they keep away from their friends or family．On the other hand，being busy with their smartphones can cause accidents，which brings them more pains than pleasure．（从两个方面分析了"低头族"对手机产生依赖以及低头玩手机的危害．）
As a matter of fact，they can take up reading to kill the time during their trips．【高分句型二】Reading books or newspapers can also enrich their knowledge．The pleasure from reading is a pleasant experience they can't have from using smartphones．（发表自己的看法即：用阅读来代替玩手机将会获取更多的乐趣．）

点评 写提纲类的作文时，需要根据要点，按照逻辑顺序重新组织材料，力求行文连贯，链接自然，句型多样，语法结构准确无误，表达简明扼要等．